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+6Penny FruitCake alex Blackrose -♥Sweet19971♥- xXlexiXx 10 posters |
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xXlexiXx
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| Subject: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!)  Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| i just made a drawing - before:
rate 1-10 should i make a shop? o.O - after:
wich is better? your welcome Ani xD
Last edited by ~peace♥~ on Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:15 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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-♥Sweet19971♥-
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:31 pm | |
| omg it's very cute looooolzz but i think u have to do some edit on it looolz but u drawing better than me T.T lol 8/10 | |
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Blackrose
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:32 pm | |
| 8/10 nice job *thumbs up* | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| Great Job!
-Her shoulders are too broad
-There's no shading
-One eye is higher than the other
-One arm is higher than the other
-The bottom of the shirt is like floating over the shorts
-On the shorts, where her "place" is, it's too triangular. No shorts/pants are like that. o_o' | |
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xXlexiXx
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 6:38 pm | |
| @Aniyou always bring my spirits up xD
I'll work on it now lol | |
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FruitCake
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:08 pm | |
| You should make a shop. Bob agrees too.
10/10 it's great (: | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:37 pm | |
| 6/10 Her head is way too big for her body, and her neck has a weird shape. Her hips are too skinny. I can tell that you erased on the shoul, you should've left them like that on the second erase. The eyes don't have much effort put into them, and the top half of her body is too small. You also kept doing this:  |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:50 pm | |
| One eye is is shaded darker
The blue thing around her neck has no outline. | |
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Penny
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:51 pm | |
| 7/10 Really good, but Just a little more practice and I'm positive it'll be perfect. | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:11 am | |
| second one is prettier in my opinion 8/10 | |
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Pommu-pon
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sun Sep 04, 2011 4:52 am | |
| 8/10. Really pretty. The second one is nice. It's got colours~   | |
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lucia
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sun Sep 04, 2011 6:41 am | |
| i like the second one 10/10! | |
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XxbritneyxX
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| | Subject: Re: drawing lolz (EDITED!!!!) Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:55 am | |
| 7/10 Just improve on the eyes  | |
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