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Sharpsul999
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PostSubject: ~The Life Sacrifice~ #1   Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:14 pm

~Introduction~

This fantasy story is about the many lives of a big group of friends, fighting for their lives. They sacrifice until it becomes too hard. The main character, Sharpsul, puts all the war to stop. How? Find out in the story...

~Chapter 1- The Beginning

It was a world of war, and a land of sacrifice. The land of Fire was too soon end. A little boy wanted to fix that, and that was Sharpsul.

I am Sharpsul. I am 10 years old, and would sacrifice anything to change this world. My birthday is coming on the 27th, and I do want my birthday to be like this. I wanted it to stop now.

"Sharp, get back here now." said my teacher. He trains me to fight. He understands my dream.

"If you want to save this world, ACT LIKE IT." He said.

"OK OK!" I groaned.

We went to the training field. I put on my training belt, its called a moyoto. A moyoto might sound Japanease, but its not.

"Do the new trick I showed you." Mr. Rurn.

I flipped into the air, and pushed wind. The wind flown thru the air and the trees came down.

"Waaah!" I shouted, flying away from the air.

"You need more confidence..." he said.
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PostSubject: Re: ~The Life Sacrifice~ #1   Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:18 pm

like it Smile i want more! btw japanese is spelt like that ^^
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PostSubject: Re: ~The Life Sacrifice~ #1   Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:26 pm

I like it! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: ~The Life Sacrifice~ #1   Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:30 am

Chapter 2 will be written shortly!
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PostSubject: Re: ~The Life Sacrifice~ #1   Tue Mar 23, 2010 5:04 pm

Cool! Can't wait for more! Love it Very Happy
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