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PostSubject: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:49 pm

lol it took forever to do this hopefully its shaded and...yea lol (btw the arms are supposed to be angled that way x3)
here u go xD:
 
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:51 pm

-One arm is fatter than the other
-She's slanted
-She has no nose (I'm such a hippocrit.)
-Her eye is too high up and it's really far from the center line
-Everything seems to be outlined except for the dress..?

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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:53 pm

6/10 The eyes have no effort, and her necklace heart has no outline. The hair doesn't look too good. Her head is too big compared to her body. The outline is overlapped, everywhere, and her body is crooked. There is no shading, the neck is too thin, and her breasts are facing the wrong way.
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:54 pm

you always make me feel so loved *sarcasm* lol i should just do fashion xD
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:54 pm

it's pretty good about 7.0/10.
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:55 pm

plus i started like,2 years ago :/ its supposed to be a mix of chibi and anime...jesus i need tips....
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:59 pm

tips:
work on your shading and body proportions....
also you can do exactly what i did. i used to draw exactly like you but what I did was looked up a whole bunch of drawing tutorials on youtube.you would be suprised how helpfull they are..of course its going to take time but this is a really great start...
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:24 pm

Ask some people on here.
They give some good tips and they tell you what's wrong.
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing! :D   Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:47 pm

Her dress seems a little to iffy, and is her hair supposed to bulge at the top? 7.5/10 Getting better. :}



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