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PostSubject: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 7:18 pm

here it is:
like it?
rate 1-10 hopefully it is to your liking now xD
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 7:31 pm

-She's slanted (I'm a perfectionist so it really ticks me off. xP)
-Why are the shoulders so dark?
-The colouring isn't even (Some spots are darker than the other)
-FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- You did not colour in the lines :c
-The writing on the green part on her "sleves"/arm warmers isn't centered
-Erase Better
-She has no skin colour; she's pale
-As far as the eye goes, the shape and shading are great. The white dot can be a tad smaller though.
-Her body has no curves in it.

4/10

Sorry if I seem harsh. xD
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 7:34 pm

xD I get it this pic was supposed to be slanted a bit,I'll add curves tomorrow :3 the earaser I'm using is REALLY cheap trololololololol
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 7:58 pm

what ani said >.< also her hair seems "stale" It seems kinda like rigid and unnatural other than that very good ^^
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 8:00 pm

I think it looks very good. good job. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 8:59 pm

Good, but I also don't understand why she's slanted. And is her nose supposed to be lined with the edge of her mouth..?
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 9:16 pm

um love it 7.5/10.
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 9:28 pm

ロレン-rooren Very Happy
what Ani said.
you should work on your anatomy Very Happy
6.5/10 Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeMon Sep 05, 2011 11:55 pm

i see ur also chinese!!! me too!!! 的就觉得像 i know it doesnt make sense though lol xD im still learing how to write and read chinese lol
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeTue Sep 06, 2011 12:21 am

-Shes slanted.
-The hair has no detail in it.
-She has no breasts, or curves.
-The neck has a weird shape.
-The shading isn't very good.
-The arms are too skinny.
-As her dress comes down, her hips get big. Way too big.
-She has no eyebrows.
-You colored outside of the line.

4/10

Sorry if I sound mean.
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeTue Sep 06, 2011 12:33 am

hmm its really cool!!!7/10! do u like my pic? its my avitar.
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PostSubject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol   a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Icon_minitimeTue Sep 06, 2011 5:41 am

~Shes slanted.
~The hair is plain
~The colour choice & colouring is not very good.
~The arms are skinny then fatter at the bottom.
~You colored outside of the line.

Sorry if I sound mean, I just think you can do better. 4/10
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