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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:18 pm | |
| - here it is:
like it? rate 1-10 hopefully it is to your liking now xD | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:31 pm | |
| -She's slanted (I'm a perfectionist so it really ticks me off. xP) -Why are the shoulders so dark? -The colouring isn't even (Some spots are darker than the other) -FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF- You did not colour in the lines :c -The writing on the green part on her "sleves"/arm warmers isn't centered -Erase Better -She has no skin colour; she's pale -As far as the eye goes, the shape and shading are great. The white dot can be a tad smaller though. -Her body has no curves in it.
4/10
Sorry if I seem harsh. xD | |
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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:34 pm | |
| xD I get it this pic was supposed to be slanted a bit,I'll add curves tomorrow :3 the earaser I'm using is REALLY cheap trololololololol | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:58 pm | |
| what ani said >.< also her hair seems "stale" It seems kinda like rigid and unnatural other than that very good ^^ | |
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Katie_Forever Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1687 Join date : 2011-06-30 Age : 25 Location : Lala Land :)
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:00 pm | |
| I think it looks very good. good job. | |
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Penny Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1659 Join date : 2011-07-28 Age : 90 Location : Yummy waffle...# Thank you, son. :]
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 8:59 pm | |
| Good, but I also don't understand why she's slanted. And is her nose supposed to be lined with the edge of her mouth..? | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:16 pm | |
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Jian Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1266 Join date : 2010-05-10 Age : 23 Location : hell probably
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 9:28 pm | |
| ロレン-rooren what Ani said. you should work on your anatomy 6.5/10 | |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:55 pm | |
| i see ur also chinese!!! me too!!! 的就觉得像 i know it doesnt make sense though lol xD im still learing how to write and read chinese lol | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:21 am | |
| -Shes slanted. -The hair has no detail in it. -She has no breasts, or curves. -The neck has a weird shape. -The shading isn't very good. -The arms are too skinny. -As her dress comes down, her hips get big. Way too big. -She has no eyebrows. -You colored outside of the line.
4/10
Sorry if I sound mean. |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:33 am | |
| hmm its really cool!!!7/10! do u like my pic? its my avitar. | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!! Featured User
Posts : 4132 Join date : 2011-06-01 Location : derp
| Subject: Re: a picture that took REALLY long for me to do lol Tue Sep 06, 2011 5:41 am | |
| ~Shes slanted. ~The hair is plain ~The colour choice & colouring is not very good. ~The arms are skinny then fatter at the bottom. ~You colored outside of the line.
Sorry if I sound mean, I just think you can do better. 4/10 | |
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