Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
xXlexiXx
Loyal Fantagian


Posts : 1588
Join date : 2011-01-27
Age : 98
Location : byeeeeeeee

PostSubject: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:40 pm

Spoiler:
 

This is NOT colored yet,so it has no shading,I am still working on it,tell me what i need to improve and whatnot xD mmkai lol.
1-10 is the scale! bai!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Penny
Loyal Fantagian


Posts : 1659
Join date : 2011-07-28
Age : 82
Location : Yummy waffle...# Thank you, son. :]

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:44 pm

Really good 7/10

You've been improving on not slanting her anatomy.
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://hurhurhur.webs.com/
alex
Administrator
Administrator


Posts : 23506
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 18
Location : google maps

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:49 pm

-Clean the edges
-Her left sleeve has some pencil markings at the bottom
-Her right arm is skinnier than the other
-What's that line on her hair?
-The thing "behind" her head doesn't look quite right
-Still a bit slanted
-Darken the outlines of her eyes
-Darken the outline of her collar
-Clean up her nose a bit
-Her head is too fat.

_________________


tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Blackrose
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 7332
Join date : 2010-07-20

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:57 pm

7.5/10 your getting better and better ^o^
Back to top Go down
View user profile
alex
Administrator
Administrator


Posts : 23506
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 18
Location : google maps

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:58 pm

Anime wrote:
you're getting better and better ^o^

Yeah. You are c:

_________________


tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Blackrose
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 7332
Join date : 2010-07-20

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:02 pm

Ani wrote:
Anime wrote:
you're getting better and better ^o^

Yeah. You are c:

dang Ani lmao you keep quoting and editing my posts O_o good job peace
Back to top Go down
View user profile
v
Moderator
Moderator


Posts : 9586
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 16
Location : i'm always watching

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:46 pm

Nice, but needs a few adjustments.

Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c:

_________________

tumblr
let's catch up.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Guest
Guest



PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:56 pm

Charlotte wrote:
Nice, but needs a few adjustments.

Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c:
What Charlotte said. :3


Last edited by Finn on Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:01 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
lucia
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 948
Join date : 2011-09-04
Age : 16
Location : at my home

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:39 pm

the sides r a bit messy no offense though
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Bbydoll
Dedicated Fantagian


Posts : 1413
Join date : 2010-09-08
Age : 19
Location : Sinnoh

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:15 am

*I can't tell if that's a crown or a bun :X
*I think her nose and mouth are a little awkwardish looking.
*The arms aren't proportioned.
*and you defined the right side of her chest, but the left is just a curved line o_O
*and the chin is too "squiggly"
*I think her eye is too close to the end of her face.. unless you want her to have like a box head, I suggest giving her features some room to breathe. :3
Back to top Go down
View user profile
lucia
Passionate Fantagian


Posts : 948
Join date : 2011-09-04
Age : 16
Location : at my home

PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:20 am

its way better then mine im horrible at drawing but im good at oragami!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)   Today at 7:19 pm

Back to top Go down
 
picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Links in picture reminder
» New TFC Picture or Banner?
» Fan made Chaos Dwarf army book
» Potato Puffs
» 80 Gigapixel 360degree picture of London.

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Artwork-
Jump to: