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PostSubject: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:31 pm

Got better?
rate 1-10

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-.- complete fail Dx


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PostSubject: Re: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:34 pm

-I don't see any shading on the "sleves"
-She's completely lop-sided
-There's no hair on the side of her head
-Her eyes are not porportionate/even/centered/shaped correctly
She has no chin (And her chin should have shading)

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PostSubject: Re: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:57 pm

Ani wrote:
-I don't see any shading on the "sleves"
-She's completely lop-sided
-There's no hair on the side of her head
-Her eyes are not porportionate/even/centered/shaped correctly
She has no chin (And her chin should have shading)

ok.. I did this kinda rushed so i understand it.
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PostSubject: Re: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 8:58 pm

lol its better then i can do. so good job Smile
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PostSubject: Re: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:06 pm

Well, it's okay. The hair shape is a bit odd though, and the top of the head needs a little more hair, if you get it. c:
The body is a little to small, but if it's supposed to be like that, then I'm sorray. The dress shading is okay though. The lines need to be a little cleaned up.And maybe spread the eyes a little more apart? Well, the eyes are okay though, but the left eye seems a little too close, and it looks strange because the nose and mouth are way at the side. The bow is good, though.
Sorry if it sounds a bit rude. :c

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PostSubject: Re: 2nd Drawing.. Got better?   Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:27 pm

cool i would rate it 5/10 C:
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