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PostSubject: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:36 pm

heres a pic I drew QUITE a while ago

OPEN MEH!:
 

so,havw I improved or gotten worse?
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:37 pm

first... i say inbetween? your getting better still lol
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:39 pm

That's not bad, but she seems like she's in a wave sort of movement. Her eye is too far and her arm is ishy. And what's up with her legs?

6/10 :}
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:40 pm

@Penny i dunno xD this was 2009 people lolz
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:42 pm

I refuse to rate it because it's a couple years old; you couldn't have improved by going back in time. :}

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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:42 pm

@Ani i mean,have i improved from then to now xD
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:43 pm

my turn to rate: 6/10.
improvements:

- the legs go slanted near the end of the picture,
- i think just maybe the hair is covering tooo much or her face? O_o
- i can't see the left arm.
- the writing at the top is kinda blurry
- and lastly work on it being more straight
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:47 pm

Kagome...this was two years ago -_-
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 8:52 pm

~peace♥~ wrote:
Kagome...this was two years ago -_-

yes but i'm just telling the 10 or 9 year old you what improvements you would need lol Wink Razz
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:08 pm

i love that pic! 10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:36 pm

~peace♥~ wrote:
@Penny i dunno xD this was 2009 people lolz

Ahh...Well, bet you gut better.
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:33 pm

8/10 like Ani said the eyes and her body is like in a curve. plus one of her arms looks smaller then the other. o.e or its just me. oh well. better then what i would ever be able to draw.
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:07 pm

It's nice, I like the way the hair falls over her eyes, it looks like a sort of fashion. However, an arm is improper, but I still give you a 9/10. I love it. Nice sketching! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:00 pm

LOVE IT 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:56 pm

Okay. I know this was two years ago but I'm still gonna critique.
if you're not okay, feel free to skip this post. :3

OKAY.
*I think her eye is too close the the edge of her face, so it kinda makes her face look real flat
*I can see you were trying to hide her arms... but it seems too thin.
*yeah, her body is slanted.
*look at where her legs start.... that part should be covered, otherwise you would be able to see whats in between.
*her head is a little too narrow. there's no actual jaw line, or anything o.o

Although, I do like her necklace.

overall - 4/10

If this was two years ago I can't wait to see how you've improved (^_~)
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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Mon Sep 12, 2011 2:24 pm

*Too wavy
*Erase better & theres places that need to be erased.

* The eye is too close to the edge.
7/10

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PostSubject: Re: a picture I drew a year or two ago xD   Mon Sep 12, 2011 2:40 pm

I'm not rating something that's this old, that be stupid and you weren't asking for feedback but I will say you have improved :3
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