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xXlexiXx
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PostSubject: a new drawing :D   Fri Sep 09, 2011 2:37 pm

I spent a day on this,so hope you like!

herez teh drawing:
 

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me likie it xD

ffff I noticed this is wrong topic,sorry guys Surprised
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing :D   Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:45 pm

C: Luff it!

8.5/10 AWESOME JOB!
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing :D   Fri Sep 09, 2011 5:00 pm

Some tips -

-Draw from the wrist, not the hand/fingers.
-Use guidelines, it helps a lot. (google manga guidelines tutorial)
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing :D   Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:38 pm

5/10.
The hair...you need to make it a little bit over the base of the head and don't make it look like you just drew bang on there. It needs way more strands. The nose isn't in the center, and I can't tell which way she's facing. Her nose is facing the opposite side of the eye, which makes it harder to tell. Her head is a bit too round, and the left side of her body looks a straight line, and the right is shaped more. The dress has no wrinkles.

Sorry if I sound mean, I'm trying to help you. :/
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing :D   Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:39 pm

9.5/10 Not bad.
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PostSubject: Re: a new drawing :D   Sat Sep 10, 2011 12:54 pm

-slanted
-hair is too skinny
-hair comes in strands
-it's not coloured [or shaded, for that matter!]
-Her neck is too long.
-neck is too skinny
-you need to clean up the outlines
-her mouth is literally going straight up. *tries to do it withmy mouth* nope doesn't work. :T
-her nose should face forward, not to the side

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