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PostSubject: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 1:54 pm

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rate 1-10 i tried to make it as good as possible :\
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PostSubject: Re: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 1:59 pm

-some of her hair is darker than the others, and some parts aren't even coloured!
-never colour w/ a pencil
-if her arms are going to be that short, then you should add some hands
-her eye is too far to the side+too small
-what happened to her neck..?
-her arms are like noodles [too skinny]
-hair has strands
-she's too large for her arms
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PostSubject: Re: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 1:59 pm

6/10
Trim the outline of the arms a bit. Her nose is facing the wrog way. The shine of her pupil should be to the other side if you want her facing the right. The neck is too long, too thin, and has a weird shape. She has no eyebrows. The shape of her shoulders are very weird, and too big. Her hair shouldn't have that "Buldge" at the top, and the bottom should stick out instead of being so round. She has no wrinkles in her dress, which says theres no shading.
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PostSubject: Re: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 2:05 pm

5/10

~Don't EVER color with a pencil. You will most likely mess it up.
~Her arms are too thin
~She has no fingers
~Her shoulders are too round
~Her body seems a little big for the arms
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PostSubject: Re: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 2:17 pm

I see improvement going on. ♥

As Finn said, flip the nose so it's pointing the other way. The arms are a little too skinny.The edges could be a bit cleaner, though. The eye is good, and the mouth should be a little bit higher. The hair is okay, it's just that the shape is a bit odd in my opinion. Coloring with pencils is fine; you just need to color a bit neater with it.
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PostSubject: Re: yet another drawing x3   yet another drawing x3 Icon_minitimeSat Sep 10, 2011 3:31 pm

7.8/10
Not bad.
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