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PostSubject: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:50 pm


i've started some colouring, critique?

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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 11, 2011 12:57 pm

I love critiquing. ;3;<3

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It's nice! The shading on the face is good. In my opinion, I think the arms and the legs need work, though. [the shading] It's very cute, don't get me wrong. The arms need work, too. It seems a bit rough on the left [or right i'm not sure lololol] shoulder, though. The expression is adorable, and the eye is fantastic. One leg is bigger than the other; need to fix that. The hair and the hat is cute. >w<

That's all I see, though. Wonderful job. c:
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:13 pm

Thanks I'll try to work on that. :3

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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:21 pm

The skin shading should have more tone, or something like that. Good for your first
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:26 pm

LOL, it's not my first. o_o

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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sat Sep 17, 2011 4:56 pm

That is not a sketch.
A sketch isn't coloured.
It has remains of the base you first drew.
And they never look neat.
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:48 am

@Munny oh yes when i sketch there always pencil lines and when i try erasing them they still stay there ....
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:42 pm

It's okay, just work on the leg sizing.
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:43 pm

Cool 9/10 Not bad
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PostSubject: Re: a sketch of some sort   Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:46 pm

It's cute :3

I think the bangs/face on her hair should be connected with the rest of her hair, as opposed to a line drawn so it looks like the body of her hair is covering it. I think the blush that you gave her is a tad too low. if anything some of her hair should be covering it, to give her face a liddo' but of "dimension" I also agree with everybody else about the shading. but it's really cute. I suppose that those are leg warmers on her feet, if they are, they're really cute xD
if they're not, you should work on the boots. ;P

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