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PostSubject: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:33 am

i drew her. <3333

there's a reference picture in her art gallery.
Critique?

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tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:37 am

Very nice !
It's just one of the eyes is bigger than the other, but I love how you did the shading(is that what it's called?) in them
& The head shape on the top seems to be a bit too flat imo.

I give it a 8/10 in all (:
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:41 am

9/10
Lol awshum bro
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:57 am

not da gr8st, beter dan anover pic i seen ov urs tho!
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:00 am

Sorry...but report. o -o

Yo, that's seriously good.

8/10
May I use it? :]
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:51 am

That's actually very good!
The chin has an awkward position there; it's kinda flat on the right side. The hair is fantastic, though. c:

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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:53 am

Pretty good Smile

good job.
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:07 am

you're definitely getting better <3

I think the outline color you chose for her face is too light. I had to strain my eyes a bit to see it.
I just woke up. (yes this place is the first thing I visit xD)

but the eyes are superbly gawjus.

Overall I say 7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:22 am

10/10! though, i think the chin looks a lil weird
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:27 am

Not too bad.

Critique?
You need to fix the head shape and add eyebrows. And the hair looks kinda weird, if you know what I mean. I'm not good at explaining.
And the facial features are almost invisible. Make them the same color as the head outline. Also, I think she needs a neck.
And.. yeah, I think that's it.

You have improved since last time. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:30 am

yea its not too bad! just work on the chin
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:45 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Sorry...but report. o -o

Yo, that's seriously good.

8/10
May I use it? :]

She didn't even do anything... I think lol


I like it :3
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:43 pm

love it! 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:48 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Sorry...but report. o -o

Yo, that's seriously good.

8/10
May I use it? :]

Of course~

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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:45 pm

i like it! 10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:14 am

fantageroxs wrote:
i like it! 10/10!

Lol thanks.
No need to post it like 4 times. xD

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PostSubject: Re: hey look it's abbey   Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:29 am

Relora wrote:
Mr.Taost wrote:
Sorry...but report. o -o

Yo, that's seriously good.

8/10
May I use it? :]

She didn't even do anything... I think lol


I like it :3

Multiple accounts. xDD

10/10 I like it.
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