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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:33 am | |
| i drew her. <3333 there's a reference picture in her art gallery. Critique? | |
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Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:37 am | |
| Very nice ! It's just one of the eyes is bigger than the other, but I love how you did the shading(is that what it's called?) in them & The head shape on the top seems to be a bit too flat imo.
I give it a 8/10 in all (: | |
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Penny Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1659 Join date : 2011-07-28 Age : 90 Location : Yummy waffle...# Thank you, son. :]
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:41 am | |
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cxiidanni New Fantagian
Posts : 7 Join date : 2011-09-13 Age : 25 Location : Australia.
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:57 am | |
| not da gr8st, beter dan anover pic i seen ov urs tho! | |
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| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:00 am | |
| Sorry...but report. o -o
Yo, that's seriously good.
8/10 May I use it? :] |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:51 am | |
| That's actually very good! The chin has an awkward position there; it's kinda flat on the right side. The hair is fantastic, though. c: | |
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Katie_Forever Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1687 Join date : 2011-06-30 Age : 25 Location : Lala Land :)
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:53 am | |
| Pretty good good job. | |
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RadioGummie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1416 Join date : 2010-09-08 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:07 am | |
| you're definitely getting better <3
I think the outline color you chose for her face is too light. I had to strain my eyes a bit to see it. I just woke up. (yes this place is the first thing I visit xD)
but the eyes are superbly gawjus.
Overall I say 7.5/10
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:22 am | |
| 10/10! though, i think the chin looks a lil weird | |
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Magdaleena Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261 Join date : 2010-04-26 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:27 am | |
| Not too bad. Critique? You need to fix the head shape and add eyebrows. And the hair looks kinda weird, if you know what I mean. I'm not good at explaining. And the facial features are almost invisible. Make them the same color as the head outline. Also, I think she needs a neck. And.. yeah, I think that's it. You have improved since last time. | |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 9:30 am | |
| yea its not too bad! just work on the chin | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 1:45 pm | |
| - Mr.Taost wrote:
- Sorry...but report. o -o
Yo, that's seriously good.
8/10 May I use it? :] She didn't even do anything... I think lol I like it :3 | |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 2:43 pm | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 7:48 pm | |
| - Mr.Taost wrote:
- Sorry...but report. o -o
Yo, that's seriously good.
8/10 May I use it? :] Of course~ | |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Tue Sep 13, 2011 8:45 pm | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:14 am | |
| - fantageroxs wrote:
- i like it! 10/10!
Lol thanks. No need to post it like 4 times. xD | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!! Featured User
Posts : 4132 Join date : 2011-06-01 Location : derp
| Subject: Re: hey look it's abbey Wed Sep 14, 2011 12:29 am | |
| - Relora wrote:
- Mr.Taost wrote:
- Sorry...but report. o -o
Yo, that's seriously good.
8/10 May I use it? :] She didn't even do anything... I think lol
I like it :3 Multiple accounts. xDD 10/10 I like it. | |
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