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PostSubject: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Thu Mar 25, 2010 9:12 pm

Procrastination caused this.
Rate from 1-10
and tell me what you think!!!
Thanks!
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The world is falling apart
Stress takes over
I want to scream
I
want to shout
I want to pull my hair out
Not caring about the
pain

But then I hear your voice
Calming
Sweet
Funny
Kind

We
can relate to each other
All the time
Especially with our
annoying school lives

You talk to me when you're busy
You talk
to me whenever you can
You tell me about your dreams
You tell me
about everything

You make me be in a state of bliss
When I'm
feeling down
I smile
When it was originally a frown

You
always know what to say
You always know how to make my day
Saranghaeyo
Wo
ai ni
Ai shi teru

One meaning.

I love you <3
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 12:21 pm

Awww, x3 10.10!
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 1:38 pm

aww its amazing! 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:01 pm

Thanks guys Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:04 pm

that is so beautiful. Especially the ending once you get it..

AND I HAVE ANOTHER LANGUAGE FOR CHUR I LOVE YOU LIST!!


Te amo.

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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:25 pm

Oooo thanks (:
I knew that lol.
Just didn't fit in D: D:

and thank you! (:
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:28 pm

XD
yaah....
Very Happy
It dosnt, I tried it out maiselfsh...

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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:28 pm

LOL! I appreciate it though ^ ^
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 4:38 pm

yah...

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Lol. Well. Be happy with your poem. ish great.

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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:16 pm

Thats really great c:

I liek it c:
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:18 pm

Thanks straw (:
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:46 pm

No problem Gracie Very Happy


Make more! make more! *chants XD
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:51 pm

I saw this on dA~

You kick butt at that last part, Gracie.
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:06 pm

lol thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:35 pm

thats not cheesy thats actually rlly good 9/10 nice poem!
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:13 pm

thanks thaliaaa!
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PostSubject: Re: Haha. Another Cheesy Poem! By Sakura   Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:13 pm

Dats cute!!!
10/10!
You should write more!

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