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PostSubject: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeSun Sep 18, 2011 8:56 pm

okie so ive made alot of art and im going to now display them !! enjoy !

request from my art shop for anime....( she left Sad .....)
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this was a fail from my art shop lol
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again ... another request from my art shop
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you guessed it.....another request made for relora
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this ISNT a request and one of my favs <3
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and here is another personal drawing of mine XD
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Okay thats it for now....please tell me if you like them Smile
more will be added soon and i have more at my blog, i just showed my fav's here.

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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeSun Sep 18, 2011 9:33 pm

If you don't mind, I'd like to critique a bit. c:

Drawing for Anime:

So called "fail" drawing:

The one crying with the red dress on:

Relora's Order:

Kiss:

Crying #2:

Good job! : D
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeSun Sep 18, 2011 10:32 pm

Y thank you..and I have been working on reloras artwork for like two days already because I was never really happy with the outcome...
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeSun Sep 18, 2011 10:54 pm

I like it!
Critiques:
First Drawing in the collection:
The eyes are a little different and the picture seems a little too wide (Try editting it to make it a little more taller or less wide ;]). The ears are a little too big but other than that I really like it!
8/10

Second Drawing in the collection:
I don't think it's a fail. Try looking up a reference for the mouth though. Other than the mouth I REALLY REALLY like it 9.9/10

Third Drawing in the collection:
I love it! Try adding more things to the hair..It looks like it's all stiff and it doesn't fall down with the pose. 9.5/10

Fourth drawing in the collection:
It's good, but kind of skinny. And the arms look weird when they come out, so try to make it less pointy at the armpit. Also with the rest of the arm. This isn't the best out of your collection, but it is really good. Especially if you are under my age (10). 8/10

Fifth Drawing in the collection:
If it's a kiss on the cheek, 10/10
If it's a kiss on the mouth, Try working on a curve with the guy's bottom lip a little bit. 9.5/10

Sixth Drawing in the collection:
Too skinny, and the pose is kind of stiff. I'd give it a 9/10


Sorry if my critiques are useless. xD
Especially if you're over 11 ene.
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 19, 2011 4:37 am

They are awesome 'nuff said
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 19, 2011 7:32 am

Fuko-Chan wrote:
I like it!
Critiques:
First Drawing in the collection:
The eyes are a little different and the picture seems a little too wide (Try editting it to make it a little more taller or less wide ;]). The ears are a little too big but other than that I really like it!
8/10

Second Drawing in the collection:
I don't think it's a fail. Try looking up a reference for the mouth though. Other than the mouth I REALLY REALLY like it 9.9/10

Third Drawing in the collection:
I love it! Try adding more things to the hair..It looks like it's all stiff and it doesn't fall down with the pose. 9.5/10

Fourth drawing in the collection:
It's good, but kind of skinny. And the arms look weird when they come out, so try to make it less pointy at the armpit. Also with the rest of the arm. This isn't the best out of your collection, but it is really good. Especially if you are under my age (10). 8/10

Fifth Drawing in the collection:
If it's a kiss on the cheek, 10/10
If it's a kiss on the mouth, Try working on a curve with the guy's bottom lip a little bit. 9.5/10

Sixth Drawing in the collection:
Too skinny, and the pose is kind of stiff. I'd give it a 9/10


Sorry if my critiques are useless. xD
Especially if you're over 11 ene.

I'm 13.......but these were very helpful thanks.
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 19, 2011 9:00 am

I like 8-)
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 19, 2011 3:21 pm

Any critique
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PostSubject: Re: sherley's art gallery <3   sherley's art gallery <3 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 19, 2011 4:40 pm

That fail drawing is one of my favorites CRAZY 8-D

I personally like them all <3
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