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PostSubject: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 4:58 pm

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This is what I have come from <3 I'm so happy for myself xD very satisfied lawl
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:10 pm

That's great! Just keep on working to get better.
I love tinkerbell. <3
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:14 pm

Wait, I'm confused. xD Do you mean that you're showing your improvements? Or did you draw those at the same time. They're different drawing styles. o3o
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:18 pm

improvements lawl,the anime eyes are the improved ones xDDD
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:20 pm

Can I critique the improved one? o3o
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:24 pm

i like the first one
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:29 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Can I critique the improved one? o3o

oh yus i wanna get better <3
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:31 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Wait, I'm confused. xD Do you mean that you're showing your improvements? Or did you draw those at the same time. They're different drawing styles. o3o

yep they both seem like different drawing styles but they do seem "improved"
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:37 pm

I critiqued it~




okay, her head is round. heads usually have some sort of shape. make a point for a chin.
her neck seemed awkward.

her body was too short, try making them a bit longer
her arms were too short in comparison wiht her body
also, the hair is blocky. add strands :3 and just for future record, you shouldn't take the "oh i'll just cover her eyes with her hair to avoid drawing another eye" i used to do that..it didnt work well in the end. xD
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:41 pm

5/10

The neck has a weird shape, so the the hair and the head. The bangs look like water was put on it and it's steel. She needs hair strands. Her legs also look a bit chubby and stubby. They're kind of short. Everything looks wrapped around and super tight when it should seem a little loose, with shading. I would start out with a base and make the close sort of overlap, but seem thicker than the skin. Erase the lines that you don't need for the final work. The foot shape is a bit weird, and the nose is facing the wrong way. It should be facing the way the shine is or you can't tell which way he/she/it is facing.

Hope I helped :3
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 5:49 pm

its an improvement.....u shud make bigger wings better bangs and also give her some awesoem pointy ears Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:07 pm

thanks for the critique guys! ;3
I'll improve on my next drawing (:
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:09 pm

Welcome bbz
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sat Oct 08, 2011 6:44 pm

Hmm needs more improvements with the hair and neck
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:21 am

Keep practicing. ;3 You'll get bettah
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PostSubject: Re: so happy for myself xD   Sun Oct 09, 2011 2:43 am

It's good improvement.
•Chest too high.
•Everything in the body is small. Makes her head look a bit big.
•Has no chin.
•Looks as if bangs/fringe is part of the skin (Example: Look at Abbey's critique)
•Left hand is a bit awkward. Like it's fuzzy or something.
•Eye looks as if there is no white part of the eyeball.
•The girl is facing to her right while her nose is facing to her left. That's a whole mistake that needs to be fixed.
•Legs and arms too chubby.
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Hope that helped. Overall, your improvement and style, I give it 7/10 ^o^
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