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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:35 pm | |
| i am really terrible but dont laugh Please dont copy it i worked hard on it thanks all
FOREVER LOVE (verse 1 ) Flowers and chocolates Is that really love Jewelry and dinners Is that really loooove Love is something mooooorrrre
( chorus ) Love is dancing in the moonlit sky Love Finding the right guy Ooh Love how it brings together Foreverrrrrr foreverrrrrrr
(verse 2 )
Putting a ring on a finger is that really love getting gifts Is that really love finding if the shoe fits is that really love
(chorus) Love is dancing in the moonlit sky Love is finding the right guy Ooh Love how it brings us together Foreverrrr Foreverrr (verse 3)
Love is something that we hold in our hands Love is family and friends maybe sometimes it never work out but gotta get up and give it a shout
(rap) Love might might break just give it a SHAKE Love brings happiness and fate Love is the world lets a take TAKE TAKE TAKE every one dance to the beat of this song Love is strong LETS GET UP ON OUR SEATS AND SING ALONG
(chorus) ( go on strong) Love is dancing in the moonlit sky Love is finding the right guy Ooh Love how it brings us together Foreverrrr Foreverrr ( fade in the middle) Love is dancing in the moonlit sky Love is finding the right guy Ooh Love how it brings us together Foreverrrr Foreverrr ( whisper but not too soft) Love is dancing in the moonlit sky Love is finding the right guy Ooh Love how it brings us together ( fade the forevers )
Foreverrrr Foreverrr forever forever forever ( whisper this one) forever
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69hot_wangs69 Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1456 Join date : 2011-09-12 Age : 26 Location : Your pants
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:38 pm | |
| It's actually good (besides the rap part lol).
Honestly though, you dont know anything about love being only 11. I dont think anyone really does until after 18 years of age (most of the time, older than that). Dont forget how strong of a word "love" is. There are couples who will wait years before saying they love each other and right off the bat, with your first boyfriend, at 11 years old, you're telling him you love him. It will probably freak him out too.
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:42 pm | |
| i know i wanted to write a song i put tyler in it so people dont copy it but i really wrote it for someone else i am 13 by the wayz, also i know i suck at rapping | |
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Usui Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 24 Location : Worldbuscus
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:45 pm | |
| Umm who's Tyler? And singing this to Tyler might freak him out | |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| I TOLD YOU TH IS NOT FOR TYLER IT IS A SONG I ALREADY SANG HIM A SONG NOT THIS, it is top- secret , i said it was for if people copy it there going to have tyler in itXDDD i am sorry ok i wanted your option on the song not the person XP | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:50 pm | |
| - FantageLuver wrote:
- i know i wanted to write a song i put tyler in it so people dont copy it but i really wrote it for someone else i am 13 by the wayz, also i know i suck at rapping
Even 13 is too young. I'm sorry but I agree with Spy-der, and I'm not getting boyfriend till I'm 17. And hun, I'm pretty sure you're 11 as you said in another topic "HOW'D YOU KNOW I WAS 11!!?" Seriously, don't lie. |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:52 pm | |
| i am 13 i promise like pinky swear, | |
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Usui Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 24 Location : Worldbuscus
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:53 pm | |
| I agree with taost and spyder
Your still to young to say the word love
love is a very strong word | |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:58 pm | |
| sigh it is not for tyler nit for anyone it is just a song , i wrote in 5mins. | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:01 pm | |
| for a first try it's not so bad The only part i don't get it the rap part >_< | |
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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:07 pm | |
| I sang that in me head,its ok but the rap needs work <3 | |
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Link Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1248 Join date : 2011-08-27 Location : in hell
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:11 pm | |
| I agree with Spy-der and Taost. You're like what, 11? You're too young to have a boyfriend. As you get older you will know the true meaning of love. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:13 pm | |
| - FantageLuver wrote:
- sigh it is not for tyler nit for anyone it is just a song , i wrote in 5mins.
You probably didn't even write it. You are 11, stop lying. In total obviousness you are as you said it in another topic. Also, lol, 5 minutes? That shows no care. :/ Sorry, it's the truth. |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:27 pm | |
| Fine i am 11 .i didnt want anyone to know because i am not supose to give out my age. i am sorry i wrote the song for the heck of it i didnt mean to get people mad. and i wrote it like no joke .i am sorry i feel bad for yelling that .i was 13 i am sorry, and i dont know alot about love i was writing it based on a princess movie .,thats why i said if the shoes fits.
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:28 pm | |
| There's only like one period in that sentence and I don't even know what you're saying. Edit it, please. |
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Abbey Former Staff
Posts : 1462 Join date : 2010-07-18 Age : 25 Location : IG @the.abbsta
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:30 pm | |
| It's not that bad, but I have no room to be judging since I don't necessarily know what makes a song bad or good..
Anyway.. I agree with the others. Love is when you would literally give your life for the person. Just to save them or make them happy. Love is when you'd do anything for them. Anything.
You can lie to yourself and say that's how you feel, but face it, you're 11. You probably don't want to believe me, but I'm right. It's your hormones. I know it feels like this guy is the best person and that I'm probably being a biotch by telling you this, but it's the truth..Give it some time, you'll eventually get over him. Really. Hormones suck. | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:39 pm | |
| Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3
@Mr. Taost. Actually I come up with so many stories in a few minutes. If I like the idea I'm off to work and can be a perfectionist with it. And she did write it... I googled the whole song the only result was this website XD
Real nice lol though I agree with the others with the love thing. | |
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69hot_wangs69 Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1456 Join date : 2011-09-12 Age : 26 Location : Your pants
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:40 pm | |
| - Aurora wrote:
- Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3
.... No one needs to hear your 2 cents aurora. | |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:47 pm | |
| thank aurora , i am not that in love we arent even doing anything he asked me and i said yes because i didnt want to hurt his feelings i wrote the song because i wanted to | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:58 pm | |
| - Spy-der wrote:
- Aurora wrote:
- Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3
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No one needs to hear your 2 cents aurora. I'm getting a negative connotation from this lol EDIT: Oh and your welcome ^^ | |
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Katie_Forever Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1687 Join date : 2011-06-30 Age : 25 Location : Lala Land :)
| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:03 pm | |
| I didnt read it all because my brain is pretty much fried from 2 hours or doing nothing at school xD but anyways, it seems like a sweet song. I dont know how to tell you to improve or anything because Im not great at that kind of stuff but good job. | |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: My new song Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:11 pm | |
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