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PostSubject: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:35 pm

i am really terrible but dont laugh
Please dont copy it i worked hard on it
thanks all

FOREVER LOVE

(verse 1 )
Flowers and chocolates
Is that really love
Jewelry and dinners
Is that really loooove
Love is something mooooorrrre

( chorus )
Love is dancing in the moonlit sky
Love Finding the right guy
Ooh Love how it brings together
Foreverrrrrr foreverrrrrrr

(verse 2 )

Putting a ring on a finger
is that really love
getting gifts
Is that really love
finding if the shoe fits
is that really love

(chorus)
Love is dancing in the moonlit sky
Love is finding the right guy
Ooh Love how it brings us together
Foreverrrr Foreverrr
(verse 3)

Love is something that we hold in our hands
Love is family and friends
maybe sometimes it never work out
but gotta get up and give it a shout

(rap)
Love might might break just give it a
SHAKE
Love brings happiness and fate
Love is the world lets a take
TAKE TAKE TAKE
every one dance to the beat of this song
Love is strong
LETS GET UP ON OUR SEATS AND SING ALONG

(chorus)
( go on strong)
Love is dancing in the moonlit sky
Love is finding the right guy
Ooh Love how it brings us together
Foreverrrr Foreverrr
( fade in the middle)
Love is dancing in the moonlit sky
Love is finding the right guy
Ooh Love how it brings us together
Foreverrrr Foreverrr
( whisper but not too soft)
Love is dancing in the moonlit sky
Love is finding the right guy
Ooh Love how it brings us together

( fade the forevers )

Foreverrrr Foreverrr forever forever forever ( whisper this one) forever


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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:38 pm

It's actually good (besides the rap part lol).

Honestly though, you dont know anything about love being only 11. I dont think anyone really does until after 18 years of age (most of the time, older than that). Dont forget how strong of a word "love" is. There are couples who will wait years before saying they love each other and right off the bat, with your first boyfriend, at 11 years old, you're telling him you love him. It will probably freak him out too.


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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:42 pm

i know i wanted to write a song i put tyler in it so people dont copy it but i really wrote it for someone else i am 13 by the wayz, also i know i suck at rapping
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:45 pm

Umm who's Tyler? And singing this to Tyler might freak him out
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:48 pm

I TOLD YOU TH IS NOT FOR TYLER IT IS A SONG I ALREADY SANG HIM A SONG NOT THIS, it is top- secret , i said it was for if people copy it there going to have tyler in itXDDD i am sorry ok i wanted your option on the song not the person XP
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:50 pm

FantageLuver wrote:
i know i wanted to write a song i put tyler in it so people dont copy it but i really wrote it for someone else i am 13 by the wayz, also i know i suck at rapping

Even 13 is too young. I'm sorry but I agree with Spy-der, and I'm not getting boyfriend till I'm 17. And hun, I'm pretty sure you're 11 as you said in another topic "HOW'D YOU KNOW I WAS 11!!?"
Seriously, don't lie.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:52 pm

i am 13 i promise like pinky swear,
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:53 pm

I agree with taost and spyder


Your still to young to say the word love

love is a very strong word
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:58 pm

sigh it is not for tyler nit for anyone it is just a song , i wrote in 5mins.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:01 pm

for a first try it's not so bad Wink
The only part i don't get it the rap part >_<
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:07 pm

I sang that in me head,its ok but the rap needs work <3
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:11 pm

I agree with Spy-der and Taost.
You're like what, 11?
You're too young to have a boyfriend.
As you get older you will know the true meaning of love.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:13 pm

FantageLuver wrote:
sigh it is not for tyler nit for anyone it is just a song , i wrote in 5mins.

You probably didn't even write it. You are 11, stop lying. In total obviousness you are as you said it in another topic. Also, lol, 5 minutes? That shows no care. :/ Sorry, it's the truth.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:27 pm

Fine i am 11 .i didnt want anyone to know because i am not supose to give out my age. i am sorry i wrote the song for the heck of it i didnt mean to get people mad. and i wrote it like no joke .i am sorry i feel bad for yelling that .i was 13 i am sorry, and i dont know alot about love i was writing it based on a princess movie .,thats why i said if the shoes fits.


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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:28 pm

There's only like one period in that sentence and I don't even know what you're saying. Edit it, please.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:30 pm

It's not that bad, but I have no room to be judging since I don't necessarily know what makes a song bad or good..

Anyway..
I agree with the others.
Love is when you would literally give your life for the person. Just to save them or make them happy. Love is when you'd do anything for them. Anything.

You can lie to yourself and say that's how you feel, but face it, you're 11. You probably don't want to believe me, but I'm right. It's your hormones. I know it feels like this guy is the best person and that I'm probably being a biotch by telling you this, but it's the truth..Give it some time, you'll eventually get over him. Really. Hormones suck.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:39 pm

Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3


@Mr. Taost. Actually I come up with so many stories in a few minutes. If I like the idea I'm off to work and can be a perfectionist with it. And she did write it... I googled the whole song the only result was this website XD

Real nice lol though I agree with the others with the love thing.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:40 pm

Aurora wrote:
Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3


....

No one needs to hear your 2 cents aurora.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:47 pm

thank aurora , i am not that in love we arent even doing anything he asked me and i said yes because i didnt want to hurt his feelings i wrote the song because i wanted to
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 4:58 pm

Spy-der wrote:
Aurora wrote:
Juliet was in love with Romeo at age 13 just sayin' ;3


....

No one needs to hear your 2 cents aurora.

I'm getting a negative connotation from this lol

EDIT: Oh and your welcome ^^
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:03 pm

I didnt read it all because my brain is pretty much fried from 2 hours or doing nothing at school xD but anyways, it seems like a sweet song. I dont know how to tell you to improve or anything because Im not great at that kind of stuff but good job.
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PostSubject: Re: My new song   Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:11 pm

thank you katie
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