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Mila
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PostSubject: Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now   Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now Icon_minitimeSun Oct 16, 2011 8:11 pm

Mandoki was in a tree. Thinking about her father and what happened. it happened when Mandoki was in her room drawing. She heard a loud scream. She went downstairs and hid behind the couch. She saw these men taking her father. Her father saw her, he had a tear on his face.Stop , it's bad. She got down of the tree. Feet hurt. Mandoki took off her shoes. Better. She heard a very low voice behind her. She moved her head slowly. The men. She blinked. The men who took my father. She ran as far as she can. She stopped.A tear went down her face. Mandoki sat down. She was thinking. The men.Her father.Life.
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now   Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now Icon_minitimeSun Oct 16, 2011 8:14 pm

nice story but you picked the wrong forum to post this but idc cool story
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now   Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now Icon_minitimeMon Oct 17, 2011 3:07 pm

oh your right i have to put in literature, sorry but thank u
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now   Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now Icon_minitimeMon Oct 17, 2011 3:26 pm

No offense, but I'm rather confused >.<
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PostSubject: Re: Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now   Chapter 1: my story idk the title right now Icon_minitimeMon Oct 17, 2011 3:31 pm

This is confusing me.
I'm not understanding this story.
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