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 Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)

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mayanm
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:03 am

It's simply fabulous! I read the prologue and I was already thinking, "I got a book to read now!" C:
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:14 am

I'm so happy!!!^^Thank you!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:14 am

I thought it was great.
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:30 am

It's cool! Very cool. I like it. c: Good job!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Tue Nov 08, 2011 8:01 am

GD JOB LOVE IT! But there is puncuation Mistae as Loke Said Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:54 am

Okay...Chapter 3 should be done soon!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:55 am

Can't wait :3

Hope it'll be just as good XD
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:17 am

Cant Wait
wat relora said
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:16 pm

Chapter 3 is out!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 2:56 pm

I like it. You did a super job!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:03 pm

??? DON'T DO THAT POEM OF ME! IT GOES LIKE THIS: kalpal888, may your coffin be made of 100 year old oak from the tree that I plant tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:08 pm

kalpal888 wrote:
??? DON'T DO THAT POEM OF ME! IT GOES LIKE THIS: kalpal888, may your coffin be made of 100 year old oak from the tree that I plant tomorrow

It's a forum code The code is:
{ USERNAME } when using the code remove the spaces What the code is suppose to do is when you look at it, it says your username.

Good job on the story. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:23 pm

kalpal888 wrote:
??? DON'T DO THAT POEM OF ME! IT GOES LIKE THIS: kalpal888, may your coffin be made of 100 year old oak from the tree that I plant tomorrow

What did you not get from my lesson. And that has nothing to do with the topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:26 pm

Sorry.... I picked a strange quote... Razz

Anyway, thanks so much guys!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:01 pm

Sorry for double posting, but Chapter 4 is done!! It's short...
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:09 am

Gegh...I'm triple posting...are people still reading this, or should I stop?

Anyway, Chapter Five is done!!! Very Happy

I intended it be kind of like an adventure game...
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:26 am

I'm reading ^^

I enjoy it very much =D
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:28 am

Thank you!!! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:28 am

Hi
Can you marry me
please
your grammar is so attractive
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I love your story. I voted great.
@Those people who voted bad or very bad: You guys need a little bit of maturity inside ya'. Honestly, you mustn't have a single good taste in writing. :pp
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:44 am

Thank you guys!!! ^^

Normally, I don't keep writing the same story for a long time, but posting it on this forum has been a big motivator for me!
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:29 pm

Silmaril wrote:
Thank you guys!!! ^^

Normally, I don't keep writing the same story for a long time, but posting it on this forum has been a big motivator for me!

KEEP WRITING MORE
DON'T STOP.
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:30 pm

If you stop writing I slap chu >;3

They're really good, I've enjoyed it's tone quite a bit
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:05 pm

Chapter Six is out!!! It took a while...
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:45 pm

Oh I love it!

The words fit together so well, but this part bugged me


{Several minutes later, feeling much better, I get up from the bench and decide to explore the garden. Suddenly, I hear the whistling noise of another knife being thrown. The sound is too distant to have been aimed at me, but I still twitch at the sound. I walk cautiously in the direction of the sound.}

I just felt the word 'sound' was overused. To me it didn't flow as well. Other than that it was beautiful. Keep up the good work ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Chosen Spirit (Chapter 6 is out!)   Thu Nov 24, 2011 7:42 pm

Thank you for pointing that out! I changed the second "sound" to "memory".
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