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Mila
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PostSubject: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:09 pm

here ya goes. rate out of 10, 1 being the worst

Miki101 has logged in “Bff’s forevas” room: 3:23 PM
Miki101: Girlies if ur on I am on blog, working on stuff!
~Skye~ has logged in “Bff’s forevas” room: 3:27
~Skye~: Haii Miki

Miki101: Hello Skye Smile

~Skye~: awww cute smiley.

Miki101: thx. Oh hey how was the first, day of 7th grade

~Skye~: Terrible Sad My teacher is so mean. She yelled at me for making a freakin bubble with my gum.

Miki101: sowwy! So u still with Tyler?

~Skye~: Yes, he gave me a pink rose today.

Miki101: That’s so sweet. Grrrrr
>Zomo< has logged in “Bff’s forevas” room: 3:36

Miki101: hi zoey.

>Zomo<: Hi Sad

~Skye~: what’s wrong Zoey

>Zomo<: my parents are fighting AGAIN. I cant get a freakin break from them fighting. Skye can I stay over tonite

~Skye~: idk if u can, going tanning for homecoming

>Zomo<: booo

~Skye~: so what’s your dress like?

>Zomo<: nothing, since my mom is fighting. We don’t have time

>Zomo<: and enough money

~Skye~: you can borrow one of mine

>Zomo<: really. Tank wu Skye

~Skye~: ur welcome. WAIT, Miki u still there?

Miki101: yeah doin stupid homework. I don’t get this crap.

~Skye~: yeah me too. Good thing we got math and study hall together

>Zomo<: I got to go. I am going to McDonalds, to eat

Miki101: I thought u hate that place because it is all greasy crap.

>Zomo<: I know, but I only have 10 dollars. That’s the cheapest place I could find

~Skye~: zoey I am picking u up right now

>Zomo<: I thought ur going tanning?

~Skye~ yeah so. I want u to have a nice dinner. We are having steak!

>Zomo<: okay I guess?

~Skye~: moms home. I gtg. C ya soon zoey. Bye miki. LUV YA ALL

>Zomo<: I got to get ready. Byez
~Skye~ has logged out
Miki101: bye See you tomorrow
>Zomo< has logged out
Miki101; Then there was one Razz
Miki101 has logged out

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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:11 pm

is it a chat thing? o.o
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:12 pm

nice! Luv it! So many deatils{i know spelt wrong}
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Wed Nov 09, 2011 3:13 pm

yeah i do my stories like that , it is my style
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Thu Nov 10, 2011 5:13 pm

I honestly love your style. 9/10
All though, you can add what you think of the people in the chat, what happened, etc. In first person view, of course.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Fri Nov 11, 2011 5:11 pm

hanks toasty
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Fri Nov 11, 2011 6:14 pm

sorry, i really don't like this style. (i've read a couple of "chatlog" books and i didn't really like them. x_x)

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thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Fri Nov 11, 2011 6:19 pm

Pretty interesting I enjoy the style very life like in some way XD
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:02 pm

thanks for the nice comments : )
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:04 pm

Interesting. Is "Skye" myself or someone else?
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PostSubject: Re: The Bff's (story) by FantageLuver   Sat Nov 12, 2011 10:20 pm

it could be u i guess i dontz know, i made her up but i got her name from u : )
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