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PostSubject: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:33 pm

ISN'T MY TITLE CREATIVE?

Haah kidding.

Anyway sorry I've been inactive lately. >__<

Here what you wanted, ART!


It's me on my computer.

Rate 1-10 and I am always looking for critiques ^^

Note: I KNOW THE HAND IS BIG. (This isn't an edit LOOL)
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:34 pm

8/10 that's adorable. c: Tablet, right?

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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:35 pm

^ No tablet intended. 100% mouse.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:36 pm

I'd give it a 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:37 pm

8/10. I love it.
You did a super time and put some effort into it
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:38 pm

8/10. It's cute. c:
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:40 pm

Thanks everyone! x3
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:42 pm

THAT IS NOT MOUSE
I DONT BELIEVE YOU.
10/10 OMG GKGKOM
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:43 pm

mouse.
mouse?
THAT'S A LIE.

it looks awesome.

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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:43 pm

IT IS A MOUSE. YOU CAN SEARCH ALLLL OVER MY APARTMENT AND YOU WON'T FIND A TABLET.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:08 pm

7/10
Very nice, but I'd suggest making the hand and wrist smaller. Your anatomy needs some improvement.
Your backgrounds could use some work too, the dimensions aren't quite right. (Example: Your bed kind of looks like it's stapled to the wall.)
Wonderful though, for a mouse!


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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:15 pm

8.5/10
I like very much!
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:30 pm

This is awesome! 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:51 pm

Loke wrote:
7/10
Very nice, but I'd suggest making the hand and wrist smaller. Your anatomy needs some improvement.
Your backgrounds could use some work too, the dimensions aren't quit right. (Example: Your bed kind of looks like it's stapled to the wall.)
Wonderful though, for a mouse!
Thanks for actually CRITIQUING.
Yeah I'm working on it ^^'.
This is my first ACTUAL background with ACTUAL items in it, so it's a work in progress but thanks for the tip!~

Anyway thanks overall. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:43 pm

I have nothing to critique except for the hand.
The backgrond could use a bit more work to.
Its excellent though.
9/10
Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:47 am

:O Amazing no tablet?! Only mouse? 9/10 C:
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 3:24 am

Critique TIME!
Here Is The Pic And It Has Numbers

Spoiler:
 

Each Circle means a mistake

1) Like WTH The nose is a point??!?!?
2) Look At The Trash Can The Line Went Out The Lid Is Small
3) From This Yellow Spray come From?
4) This Hand IS SO FAT/THICK! and the other is thin
5) Why You Didnt Complete the line?

So The Rate Is 6/10
But Woah You Used a Mouse ! Keep Improving and practicing
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:24 am

Well if was with a mouse I can only vote 10/10

Not many people can do that well with a mouse Surprised
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:45 am

Woahh, you read my mind, i was about to comment that the arm was big xD
Anyways good job! I suck at drawing pictures with a mouse :3
10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:18 am

I know! I cannot do that with a mouse. ;-;

So.................. 10/10 ^o^
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:22 pm

Thanks everyone! Time to reply to that critique..

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Critique TIME!
Here Is The Pic And It Has Numbers

Spoiler:
 

Each Circle means a mistake

1) Like WTH The nose is a point??!?!?
2) Look At The Trash Can The Line Went Out The Lid Is Small
3) From This Yellow Spray come From?
4) This Hand IS SO FAT/THICK! and the other is thin
5) Why You Didnt Complete the line?

So The Rate Is 6/10
But Woah You Used a Mouse ! Keep Improving and practicing

I draw noses like that and it's supposed to be small x3..so I don't get what you mean there
THAT'S THE SOFA!?
That's the computer light x3. Should've worked on that a little more...
Yeaahhh my anatomy sucks. Thanks though for pointing that out! ^^
I didn't use a lineart layer. That's part of it. But didn't notice that! Godddd. I'm noticing so much stuff I didn't before.

Sorry if I seem like I'm arguing with your critique! I am kind of picky with critiques at times... >__<''
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:26 pm

@Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:29 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
@Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:35 pm

Fuko-Chan wrote:
Mr.Taost wrote:
@Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL.
HONEY, YOU, YEAH, YOU, JSKD OR FXHJVBFDXJNCFS, DON'T LISTEN TO ANYONE THAT PUNCH YOUR GUTS OUT LIKE, YEAH.
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PostSubject: Re: Art    Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:40 pm

Mushroom-Mailbox wrote:
Fuko-Chan wrote:
Mr.Taost wrote:
@Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL.
HONEY, YOU, YEAH, YOU, JSKD OR FXHJVBFDXJNCFS, DON'T LISTEN TO ANYONE THAT PUNCH YOUR GUTS OUT LIKE, YEAH.
BRO, YOU STAY OUT OF THIS. IT-IT'S TIME FOR ME TO HANDLE IT ON MY OWN. ;A;

LOOL Woow what am I even saying!?
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