Another Drawing...

I improved I think. Rate & Critique please! ^o^

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Aw, that's adorable!
The hair is really well made, and her clothing doesn't look tight.
Her feet are well positioned, but when you go up, She'd have to twist her body to make that pose. That would really hurt. But the head angling towards you is fine.
She doesn't have eyebrows.

Overall, 8.5/10. Especially seeing you've improved.

The head is too big and too round. The arms are too short, the torso is too long, and your knees are too far down.
The neck is too long, and too skinny. The eyes are too close together. Your shoulders are too small for the size of the head. You forgot eyebrows. The legs look awkward.
Good job on the clothing folds, though only one was needed in the skirt.
Try studying some anatomy, it'll help you improve. Also, try shading next time.
All together I give it a 6/10.

Loke wrote:

The head is too big and too round., the arms are too short, the torso is too long, and your knees are too far down.
The neck is too long, and too skinny. The eyes are too far apart. Your shoulders are too small for the size of the head. You forgot eyebrows. The legs look awkward.
Good job on the clothing folds, though only one was needed.
Try studying some anatomy, it'll help you improve. Also, try shading next time.
All together I give it a 6/10.

Thanks Guys!~
I dunno how to shade. >.<
It's to hard. :c

Queenfairylight7 wrote:

Loke wrote:

The head is too big and too round., the arms are too short, the torso is too long, and your knees are too far down.
The neck is too long, and too skinny. The eyes are too far apart. Your shoulders are too small for the size of the head. You forgot eyebrows. The legs look awkward.
Good job on the clothing folds, though only one was needed.
Try studying some anatomy, it'll help you improve. Also, try shading next time.
All together I give it a 6/10.

Thanks Guys!~
I dunno how to shade. >.<
It's to hard. :c

It's not that hard. Look up a tutorial, or something. Pay attention how shadows fall in real life. Just try.
Practice makes perfect.