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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Lumpy Space Human Princess Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:45 am | |
| Well, if there could be a lumpy space princess, why not a lumpy space human princess? So I decided to draw one. It's pretty plain, so give me some ideas and rate 0-10. - Spoiler:
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:43 am | |
| 7/10, not much detail, there is no star. there is no shading, and thats all. but thanks for the thought. People should respect LSP | |
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elsa ♡ Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1417 Join date : 2011-08-22 Age : 22 Location : i really don't know, where am i?
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:48 am | |
| I like it! But I have some critique.
~Maybe put some shine in her hair. ~Maybe color her eyes. ~Maybe outline the body. ~Maybe add a crown because of LSP's star. ~Maybe make her hair a little wavy, giving the effect of lumpiness. ~Maybe do some more realistic clothes.
I rate it 7/10. ◕3◕ | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:21 am | |
| Oh, okay guys! I'll get to work! EDIT: I'm done! I added LOADS of other things. Here it is! | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Thu Nov 24, 2011 8:59 am | |
| The Hands look weird. And Shade it I made one here: - Rushed One:
IK it looks yuck
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:21 am | |
| "Weird"? And I did shade the top and pant, don't you see? (Bad type of shading awedhjqwefgbwhr) [sarcasm] Thanks for the comment. | |
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mayanm Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2088 Join date : 2011-05-14 Age : 24 Location : Noitacol. It's a location all right!
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:38 am | |
| It's rather cute. But yeah, the hands are rather weird.
7.5/10 Much better than the first attempt | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:23 am | |
| Okay then, I'll fix the hands. Thanks. EDIT: here it is. I fixed the hands. YES I KNOW ONE HAND IS SHORT AND THE OTHER LONG. Don't need to comment on that. @cutey_larl- even yours is a bit too blurry, and very plain. | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:45 am | |
| Ik its rushed one the braclet is on the arm not hand. and the fingers look weird | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:57 am | |
| I've spent a lot of time on working on that, and I think it's good enough. The next time I edit it I don't want to hear, 'the whole picture looks weird!'! Here is the last and final edit.
Last edited by -♥Aubrey♥- on Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:27 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:48 pm | |
| You guys act like you can do so much better. I'd like to see you make something like that without a tablet. @Larl: Uhh, if it's a rushed work, why are you showing it? It's not making a good reference now is it?
I, for one, really like it. ^^ 8/10 |
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Winnowill Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1929 Join date : 2011-10-28
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:59 pm | |
| I agree with Taost. This is amazing work, especially considering that it was made without a tablet. The shading of her dress in the final edit is excellent, far better than I can do. 9/10! | |
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Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 23 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:01 pm | |
| it's actually not that hard @tosat and silmari and whatever https://2img.net/h/oi40.tinypic.com/kdk1er.png i mean, that one sucks too, and it's not coloured, but you just need to get a hang with the mouse. I find this drawing a bit odd. the colouring isn't very good and it's sketchy and stuff. however, i really dislike how badly you're taking the critique. i like her design, though. 4.1/10. | |
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powerstay Senior Fantagian
Posts : 393 Join date : 2011-09-01 Age : 21 Location : In America.Epic win.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:45 pm | |
| Sorry for double posting there is a mixup with me.Btw I DONT want to be off topic so You drawing are nice! Sooo sorry for double posting!
Last edited by powerstay on Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:52 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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powerstay Senior Fantagian
Posts : 393 Join date : 2011-09-01 Age : 21 Location : In America.Epic win.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:51 pm | |
| - -♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
- PLEASE STOP TRYING TO MAKE ME CHANGE IT. I've spent a lot of time on working on that, and I think it's good enough. The next time I edit it I don't want to hear, 'the whole picture looks weird!'! You've commented it once, now that's enough.
Here is the last and final edit.
Oh my gosh! Its so cool! I luv it! I know you worked hard....u worked to much....Keep up the GREAT work! | |
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lizzyroxxs New Fantagian
Posts : 19 Join date : 2011-11-23 Age : 27 Location : Ehh...
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:49 pm | |
| 7/10 i mean Where ze' junk is the star ? xDD But its goood ! | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:26 pm | |
| Thanks, everyone! c: I'm feeling on top of the world right now! | |
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Bubbles Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1823 Join date : 2011-08-28 Age : 23 Location : I dunno know. Guess
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:05 pm | |
| I like it. It's cute. 7/10 | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:41 pm | |
| Alrighty! Guys, I just made some effect to it- sparkle. Here 'tis- | |
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sherley739 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757 Join date : 2011-07-23 Age : 25 Location : district 12, panem
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:05 am | |
| its really good. 8/10. how did you make the rainbow i like it, also the grass. | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:27 am | |
| Thanks sherley ^^ I don't use paint, another program. There are some effects there, and among them's a rainbow. Soo...I put that. | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:14 am | |
| Do you use Tux Paint perhaps? By the way I'd say 7.5/10 at your age. ^^ | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:59 am | |
| - Fuko-Chan wrote:
- Do you use Tux Paint perhaps?
By the way I'd say 7.5/10 at your age. ^^ Thanks! Yeah I do, it's pretty good for all these pixels and drawings. | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:24 am | |
| She scares me! 7.5/10. Its good for your age! | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:44 am | |
| - **cutey_larl** wrote:
- She scares me!
7.5/10. Its good for your age! :( I just can't see why you're being rude. No, Timegear was right- I didn't take the critique well, but you just can't have a doubt like "It's weird" "it scares me" or all that rubbish. It hurt my feelings. No offense done. | |
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