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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:33 pm | |
| ISN'T MY TITLE CREATIVE? Haah kidding. Anyway sorry I've been inactive lately. >__< Here what you wanted, ART! It's me on my computer. Rate 1-10 and I am always looking for critiques ^^ Note: I KNOW THE HAND IS BIG. (This isn't an edit LOOL) | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:34 pm | |
| 8/10 that's adorable. c: Tablet, right? | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:35 pm | |
| ^ No tablet intended. 100% mouse. | |
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:36 pm | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:37 pm | |
| 8/10. I love it. You did a super time and put some effort into it | |
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Arthur Kirkland Senior Fantagian
Posts : 410 Join date : 2011-08-22 Age : 36 Location : -
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:38 pm | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:40 pm | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:42 pm | |
| THAT IS NOT MOUSE I DONT BELIEVE YOU. 10/10 OMG GKGKOM |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:43 pm | |
| mouse. mouse? THAT'S A LIE.
it looks awesome. | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 7:43 pm | |
| IT IS A MOUSE. YOU CAN SEARCH ALLLL OVER MY APARTMENT AND YOU WON'T FIND A TABLET. | |
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no Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 873 Join date : 2010-09-16 Age : 25 Location : no
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:08 pm | |
| 7/10 Very nice, but I'd suggest making the hand and wrist smaller. Your anatomy needs some improvement. Your backgrounds could use some work too, the dimensions aren't quite right. (Example: Your bed kind of looks like it's stapled to the wall.) Wonderful though, for a mouse!
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foreveran Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3906 Join date : 2010-08-26 Age : 29 Location : SKY :p
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:15 pm | |
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Kandi Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 852 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:30 pm | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 8:51 pm | |
| - Loke wrote:
- 7/10
Very nice, but I'd suggest making the hand and wrist smaller. Your anatomy needs some improvement. Your backgrounds could use some work too, the dimensions aren't quit right. (Example: Your bed kind of looks like it's stapled to the wall.) Wonderful though, for a mouse! Thanks for actually CRITIQUING. Yeah I'm working on it ^^'. This is my first ACTUAL background with ACTUAL items in it, so it's a work in progress but thanks for the tip!~ Anyway thanks overall. | |
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Katie_Forever Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1687 Join date : 2011-06-30 Age : 25 Location : Lala Land :)
| Subject: Re: Art Wed Nov 09, 2011 9:43 pm | |
| I have nothing to critique except for the hand. The backgrond could use a bit more work to. Its excellent though. 9/10 Good job. | |
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Janelle Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4931 Join date : 2011-02-28 Age : 21 Location : ur mom
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 1:47 am | |
| :O Amazing no tablet?! Only mouse? 9/10 C: | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 3:24 am | |
| Critique TIME! Here Is The Pic And It Has Numbers - Spoiler:
Each Circle means a mistake 1) Like WTH The nose is a point??!?!? 2) Look At The Trash Can The Line Went Out The Lid Is Small 3) From This Yellow Spray come From? 4) This Hand IS SO FAT/THICK! and the other is thin 5) Why You Didnt Complete the line? So The Rate Is 6/10 But Woah You Used a Mouse ! Keep Improving and practicing | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:24 am | |
| Well if was with a mouse I can only vote 10/10 Not many people can do that well with a mouse | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:45 am | |
| Woahh, you read my mind, i was about to comment that the arm was big xD Anyways good job! I suck at drawing pictures with a mouse :3 10/10 | |
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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 11:18 am | |
| I know! I cannot do that with a mouse. ;-;
So.................. 10/10 ^o^ | |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:22 pm | |
| Thanks everyone! Time to reply to that critique.. - **cutey_larl** wrote:
- Critique TIME!
Here Is The Pic And It Has Numbers
- Spoiler:
Each Circle means a mistake
1) Like WTH The nose is a point??!?!? 2) Look At The Trash Can The Line Went Out The Lid Is Small 3) From This Yellow Spray come From? 4) This Hand IS SO FAT/THICK! and the other is thin 5) Why You Didnt Complete the line?
So The Rate Is 6/10 But Woah You Used a Mouse ! Keep Improving and practicing I draw noses like that and it's supposed to be small x3..so I don't get what you mean there THAT'S THE SOFA!? That's the computer light x3. Should've worked on that a little more... Yeaahhh my anatomy sucks. Thanks though for pointing that out! ^^ I didn't use a lineart layer. That's part of it. But didn't notice that! Godddd. I'm noticing so much stuff I didn't before. Sorry if I seem like I'm arguing with your critique! I am kind of picky with critiques at times... >__<'' | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:26 pm | |
| @Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME. |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:29 pm | |
| - Mr.Taost wrote:
- @Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL. | |
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| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:35 pm | |
| - Fuko-Chan wrote:
- Mr.Taost wrote:
- @Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL. HONEY, YOU, YEAH, YOU, JSKD OR FXHJVBFDXJNCFS, DON'T LISTEN TO ANYONE THAT PUNCH YOUR GUTS OUT LIKE, YEAH. |
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el Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4621 Join date : 2011-07-20 Age : 22 Location : canada
| Subject: Re: Art Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:40 pm | |
| - Mushroom-Mailbox wrote:
- Fuko-Chan wrote:
- Mr.Taost wrote:
- @Larl:Honestly, you act like you can do better. If I'm correct, she clearly stated in the topic "YEAH I KNOW THE HAND IS FAT." Please, if you're going to critique, don't down rate. A critique is a FRIENDLY way of telling an artist how to get better on their working, not being so rude. If you don't know, a dot on the nose is actually THE STYLE OF ANIME.
THANK YOU. I wanted to point that out but I don't have the guts to online. LOOL. HONEY, YOU, YEAH, YOU, JSKD OR FXHJVBFDXJNCFS, DON'T LISTEN TO ANYONE THAT PUNCH YOUR GUTS OUT LIKE, YEAH. BRO, YOU STAY OUT OF THIS. IT-IT'S TIME FOR ME TO HANDLE IT ON MY OWN. ;A; LOOL Woow what am I even saying!? | |
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