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 The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*

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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:38 am

Me 2 Its SOOO NICE but there are some spelling mistakes
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:39 am

GUYS. PLEASE STOP WITH THE CORRECTING. :T

I really like it! you need to write more [;

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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 9:47 am

Spy-der wrote:
rin wrote:
Relora wrote:
Prologue
Spoiler:
 

Comments, ratings, constructive criticism all appreciated ^^


I have some grammar corrections if I may.
1.can not is cannot
2.10 and over is written in numeral form
3.dieing is dying
I can't find anything else it's very good other than that ^.^

I am seriously getting sick of all these grammar nazis.

I dont think she posted that whole thing just so that people can reply saying that she misspelled 2 words. Honestly, who gives a crap. Everybody makes grammatical errors. Everyone. Comment on the story, not her misspellings.

Why do you guys do it anyway? How is pointing out that she used 'can not', instead of 'cannot' relevant? Am I missing something? Is it to make yourself look smart? I'll tell you right now, it's not working, it's annoying.

Anyway, I didnt get to read the whole thing yet, and I've got to go. I'll finish it later and edit this post out with my opinion on the story. I just had to get that stuff off of my chest.

Dude,I never meant to use it in a rude way.Chill.There's no reason to get mad at me in genral.I just found 3 things wrong and I used it to help her in the future,sieriously bro.Chill.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 10:11 am

Ani wrote:
GUYS. PLEASE STOP WITH THE CORRECTING. :T

I really like it! you need to write more [;

It's okay if they correct. Though I wish they could have a more helpful critique, the little things matter and they need to be fixed as well.

And thanks everyone ^^

Your comments made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :3
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 8:30 pm

(sorry for the double post)

Chapter three is out everyone ^^

Hope you enjoy, don't forget to comment and critique. If you see a spelling mistake or grammatical error don't forget to include it in your post.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 8:35 pm

I loved it! The candy scene was cute...

How do you come up with the descriptive text? It's beautiful and very poetic.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Thu Nov 24, 2011 8:40 pm

Silmaril wrote:
I loved it! The candy scene was cute...

How do you come up with the descriptive text? It's beautiful and very poetic.

I'm glad you liked that.

I don't know really though. The candy scene I created in my mind after my sister gave me my favorite candy, which happen to bebottle caps which can have a purple wrapper xD, from her Halloween stash. The text just kind of comes to me. I normally get my ideas from outside influences and events and feelings to get my story going.


What I find funny is people just learned the main characters name, I really need to edit it in to chapter one lol
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PostSubject: Re: The Dead Rise Again. *Chapter Four is out*   Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:33 pm

Chapter four is out, my creative buzz for the story has diminished so don't expect a bunch of updates lol.

Probably a once or twice a month thing now :3
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