Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
Subject: First success digital drawing! Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:26 pm
Okay, title says it all. I know you might give me 4/10 or 7/10 and others, but I just wanted to show you it.
And.. and, I drew this on paper then took a picture of it and turned it to digital.
Rate & critique!
Please do not critique: - Shading [only if you ask] - Big head shape - One sleeve is bigger [That's because she's forming her body on a way] - Her legs are cut
There's more but I don't know some. XD
-THE DRAWING- [MAY BE BIG IF YOU HAVE SMALL SCREEN:
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Winnowill Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1929 Join date : 2011-10-28
Subject: Re: First success digital drawing! Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:51 pm
This is amazingly beautiful, especially if it is your first, It's way, way better than my first one, lol. There really isn't much to critique, besides what you already pointed out. Her collarbone is a little high though. I love your colour choices and texture.
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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
Subject: Re: First success digital drawing! Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:14 pm
Thanks Silmaril, I'm still learning. I suck at putting those collar bones. Lol.
Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
Subject: Re: First success digital drawing! Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:21 pm
For collar bones I suggest kind of connecting the collar bones with the shoulders and go downward... hopefully you understand what I'm talking about. All I have to say is to try to think about proportions.
But it still looks very nice. I think you did well on the shading for being a first time success. (: Well... better than me lol
Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:26 pm
