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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
| Subject: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 2:40 pm | |
| So... I haven't posted this story since well I dunno. I let some of the forum people to be a part of this. And if you want to see their cast. PRESS HEREAuthors Note: I know its short. So sorry! - Entry: 1:
November 6 I always think my parents are cuckoo. You know why? I explained it properly, I need a laptop! But no, they bought me this diary to put my feelings on.
Anyway I am pretty used to with this diary thing. But i'm pretty annoyed we moved and I go to a private school full of annoying people. Yet we have nice teachers.
Well in my first day of school it was 'great' , yeah right! The popular people which I now call RICR (Rank I can't reach) named Ashley Lee, Rina, Maggie Wood, Jae and this tenth grader named Dave started teasing me since I had a diary! A DIARY! Just one book they started teasing me. Ooh, I was ready to smash their faces into the wall. But actually, I am too embarrassed to do that.
You know what? I'm going to earn money to buy a new laptop. So I can talk in forums, then i'll make some online friends. But how? I spend all of my allowance on Martial Arts. Ooh, you think a dork like me can't do these stuff? Well I am already in my red belt!
I have a secret, there is this guy at school who I like. His name is Zachary, he's in the friendly popular group. Starting today I cannot stop thinking about Zachary. But the thing bothering me is who does he like? Ashley, Rina, Maggie... or the dorky me? I wish he likes me and I do want to just talk to him once.
I'll write longer later because i'm going to beg and fake cry for a new laptop, since I have never used one in my entire life! And I am pretty serious.
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November 7 Aargh! There is a new guy at school named Gavin. But you know what's worse?! Gavin met Rina and now he is in the RICR group! In his first day! Oh my gosh I cannot believe those RICR group members!
But the great news is... you guess, actually i'll say it now. My parents are going to buy me a laptop! They bought my fake crying and begging. They're out buying it already, so just have to wait until they come back. I'll write more later.
Finally their here! And the laptop is color purple, my favorite. But I am going to play around with it later.
I have not told you more about Zachary, he is sweet, friendly, smart and unlike the others he is generous. Sixteen girls from my class is in love with him. And well that is all I know. But I sound like a real stalker.
So.. I was on my laptop for a while and found a cool forum calles Starz Forum. But the bad news was it was swarming with RICR group members, so I think it was the RICR's website. But I sure will find some more cool forums tomorrow.
Oh God! Dinner was horrible tonight, mom cooked tuna! Bleh, I feel like throwing up. There should have been spaghetti for dinner.
But you know what is worse? I have no friends! Mostly all new students gets a friend in their first or second day. So I better get a friend or two tomorrow or else I will sulk for hours and hours.
I forgot! You don't know much about me. So here, my name is Zoey, Zoey Morri. My mom told me I had a twin named Zoe. But I have never met her. I am age fourteen. And have brown hair, brown eyes, and light skin. So I think that's all for the introduction.
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 2:45 pm | |
| its good I CANT WAIT BGY6TGXSTBBVGF6TGVGYJFHFHBVGR TIL ITSS FINISHED i skimmed | |
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**♥ Anni Hart♥** Regular Fantagian
Posts : 246 Join date : 2011-10-14 Age : 71 Location : You like krabby patties dont you squidward
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:08 pm | |
| LOL I can't wait until my brother sees this x3 [ John_Rocks ]
Love this story! If Zoey were cake OMG THAT WOULD BE SOOO HILAROUS Becuase if he saw the cast like this :
Cake [ Zoey]
John_Rocks w]Zachary] { Zoey's crush {
ROLF oh and cake would be very happy owo
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:09 pm | |
| - **♥ Anni Hart♥** wrote:
- LOL I can't wait until my brother sees this x3 [ John_Rocks ]
Love this story! If Zoey were cake OMG THAT WOULD BE SOOO HILAROUS Becuase if he saw the cast like this :
Cake [ Zoey]
John_Rocks w]Zachary] { Zoey's crush {
ROLF oh and cake would be very happy owo
BUT HE IS MY ENEMY TOO | |
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**♥ Anni Hart♥** Regular Fantagian
Posts : 246 Join date : 2011-10-14 Age : 71 Location : You like krabby patties dont you squidward
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:13 pm | |
| - xxCakexx wrote:
- **♥ Anni Hart♥** wrote:
- LOL I can't wait until my brother sees this x3 [ John_Rocks ]
Love this story! If Zoey were cake OMG THAT WOULD BE SOOO HILAROUS Becuase if he saw the cast like this :
Cake [ Zoey]
John_Rocks w]Zachary] { Zoey's crush {
ROLF oh and cake would be very happy owo
BUT HE IS MY ENEMY TOO Coulpe-Enemies! | |
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:14 pm | |
| - **♥ Anni Hart♥** wrote:
- xxCakexx wrote:
- **♥ Anni Hart♥** wrote:
- LOL I can't wait until my brother sees this x3 [ John_Rocks ]
Love this story! If Zoey were cake OMG THAT WOULD BE SOOO HILAROUS Becuase if he saw the cast like this :
Cake [ Zoey]
John_Rocks w]Zachary] { Zoey's crush {
ROLF oh and cake would be very happy owo
BUT HE IS MY ENEMY TOO
Coulpe-Enemies! O-O *gives creepy face for 10 minutes like happy appy* | |
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**♥ Anni Hart♥** Regular Fantagian
Posts : 246 Join date : 2011-10-14 Age : 71 Location : You like krabby patties dont you squidward
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:16 pm | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:18 pm | |
| I like it! The storyline is cool | |
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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:19 pm | |
| Thanks!
I'll continue later on. C= | |
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Nov 24, 2011 2:32 pm | |
| are you gonna update it today? xD
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Lillie Rookie Fantagian
Posts : 37 Join date : 2011-11-03
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:19 am | |
| Ya when you will complete?!?!?!? | |
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FruitCake Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4126 Join date : 2011-05-24 Age : 21 Location : ♫
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:18 am | |
| sorry if im rushing you im just eager | |
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Owl Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1589 Join date : 2011-02-06 Age : 26 Location : Owl City
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:43 am | |
| Oooh, looks good. I'll have to remember to keep up with this post. >w< I wonder when/how "I'll" pop up. | |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 11:36 am | |
| It is good, but you totally copied Dork Diaries. I give it a four out of ten. | |
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idi13 New Fantagian
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-10-30 Location : Stroodle Town
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:35 pm | |
| OMG the first chapter i thought this was Dork Diaries because the similarities are WAY too close come on in the first Dork Diaries Nikki wants a cell phone but her parents get her a diary to put her feelings in same as your character who wants a laptop and her parents get her a diary to put her feelings in and come on RICR is exactly the CCP clique i give this a 0 out of 10 because you practically just wrote down Dork Diaries with some teensy changes please next time come up with an original idea and even if it's bad i'll still rate it good cause you actually thought of it by copying Dork Diaries you just made me think you can't think for yourself and your talentless because you had to write someone else's book. please feel ashamed of yourself for copying one of the greatest books of all time. | |
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idi13 New Fantagian
Posts : 17 Join date : 2011-10-30 Location : Stroodle Town
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:46 pm | |
| To everyone who likes this search Dork Diaries in eBay or Amazon and they have 4 way more amazing books by Rachel Renee Russel and guess what? they are the exact same story line except better don't wait for this talentless girl to re-write them just buy them now they are amazing books that i really loved and think you will too. sorry I'm being so angry it just really bothers me that this girl would copy a great authors book and pass it off as her own i would be fine if she said this is my re-creation of a great book by Rachel Renee Russel because then she would give the REAL author some credit go get Dork Diaries and read it cause well there's already 4 of them plus there original, humorous, dramatic, and just a fun read! I'm begging you not to say she's a great writer because she didn't make this up by herself you can tell her "i like your take on Dork Diaries" or "nice recreation of this book" or anything that doesn't give her credit for re-writing this book by Rachel Renee Russel | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:15 pm | |
| - idi13 wrote:
- To everyone who likes this search Dork Diaries in eBay or Amazon and they have 4 way more amazing books by Rachel Renee Russel and guess what? they are the exact same story line except better don't wait for this talentless girl to re-write them just buy them now they are amazing books that i really loved and think you will too. sorry I'm being so angry it just really bothers me that this girl would copy a great authors book and pass it off as her own i would be fine if she said this is my re-creation of a great book by Rachel Renee Russel because then she would give the REAL author some credit go get Dork Diaries and read it cause well there's already 4 of them plus there original, humorous, dramatic, and just a fun read! I'm begging you not to say she's a great writer because she didn't make this up by herself you can tell her "i like your take on Dork Diaries" or "nice recreation of this book" or anything that doesn't give her credit for re-writing this book by Rachel Renee Russel
Now I can see how she is copying another author's idea, but I doubt she is talent less. You never know. She could instantly have an amazing original idea of her own at some random time, but you can't go on calling her talent less. Writing takes time and thought. | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:54 pm | |
| - idi13 wrote:
- To everyone who likes this search Dork Diaries in eBay or Amazon and they have 4 way more amazing books by Rachel Renee Russel and guess what? they are the exact same story line except better don't wait for this talentless girl to re-write them just buy them now they are amazing books that i really loved and think you will too. sorry I'm being so angry it just really bothers me that this girl would copy a great authors book and pass it off as her own i would be fine if she said this is my re-creation of a great book by Rachel Renee Russel because then she would give the REAL author some credit go get Dork Diaries and read it cause well there's already 4 of them plus there original, humorous, dramatic, and just a fun read! I'm begging you not to say she's a great writer because she didn't make this up by herself you can tell her "i like your take on Dork Diaries" or "nice recreation of this book" or anything that doesn't give her credit for re-writing this book by Rachel Renee Russel :x
To tell you the truth, most books are really just copies of others. There isn't much difference between books within the same category/genre besides characters and minor issues. We all know the endings to a love/drama/scary story. So your Rachel (LOL my first name right dere) Russell in turn took some of her ideas from other books, events, movies, shows. And twisted them into her own "original" plot line. Sure there are a few stories that are completely original. And you calling her talentless will not help either. Some times that's what and author needs to get started, when I was five I wrote my first "book". It was about the power puff girls. Some times taking the little ideas help us, as young writers, develop. It's different for everyone, and for you to call her talentless? I find that very unsettling. I'd like you to write your own piece of work :p | |
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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:56 pm | |
| - idi13 wrote:
- To everyone who likes this search Dork Diaries in eBay or Amazon and they have 4 way more amazing books by Rachel Renee Russel and guess what? they are the exact same story line except better don't wait for this talentless girl to re-write them just buy them now they are amazing books that i really loved and think you will too. sorry I'm being so angry it just really bothers me that this girl would copy a great authors book and pass it off as her own i would be fine if she said this is my re-creation of a great book by Rachel Renee Russel because then she would give the REAL author some credit go get Dork Diaries and read it cause well there's already 4 of them plus there original, humorous, dramatic, and just a fun read! I'm begging you not to say she's a great writer because she didn't make this up by herself you can tell her "i like your take on Dork Diaries" or "nice recreation of this book" or anything that doesn't give her credit for re-writing this book by Rachel Renee Russel
I was inspired by her. So I tried making one like it, I was thinking of doing a carnival chapter. And I have more stories than you think. If your saying this you hurt my feelings and not going to continue this story, but only in my book. ;'[ | |
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elise Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 613 Join date : 2011-12-01 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 3:01 pm | |
| No,Just,No. I make stories with my friends on the computer sometimes, their like dork diares too So, this topic is like... | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 3:32 pm | |
| - Queenfairylight7 wrote:
- idi13 wrote:
- To everyone who likes this search Dork Diaries in eBay or Amazon and they have 4 way more amazing books by Rachel Renee Russel and guess what? they are the exact same story line except better don't wait for this talentless girl to re-write them just buy them now they are amazing books that i really loved and think you will too. sorry I'm being so angry it just really bothers me that this girl would copy a great authors book and pass it off as her own i would be fine if she said this is my re-creation of a great book by Rachel Renee Russel because then she would give the REAL author some credit go get Dork Diaries and read it cause well there's already 4 of them plus there original, humorous, dramatic, and just a fun read! I'm begging you not to say she's a great writer because she didn't make this up by herself you can tell her "i like your take on Dork Diaries" or "nice recreation of this book" or anything that doesn't give her credit for re-writing this book by Rachel Renee Russel
I was inspired by her. So I tried making one like it, I was thinking of doing a carnival chapter. And I have more stories than you think. If your saying this you hurt my feelings and not going to continue this story, but only in my book. ;'[ Oh, come on. You can't let an idiot like that bring you down. Please keep on writing. I'm positive that everybody else would love to hear your story. | |
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Usui Hero Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:18 pm | |
| This is very similar to dork diaries, but its good but you should be more creative,this is way to similar to dork diaries.
Sorry for bumping.
EDIT: nice story though. | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:19 pm | |
| Don't stop because of one person. If this helps you develop as a writer I don't see why you should stop. | |
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Queen Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4500 Join date : 2010-07-20 Age : 22 Location : nowhereland
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:36 pm | |
| Okay, I'll continue it. But I am still thinking of ideas. | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: Tales of a Dorky Girl *CONTINUING* Thu Jan 26, 2012 4:43 pm | |
| - Queenfairylight7 wrote:
- Okay, I'll continue it. But I am still thinking of ideas.
Yay! I can't wait to read more! But don't rush yourself. Remember, writing takes time. I take forever sometimes, trying to dream up an idea of what to write. Sometimes, genius ideas pop into your head while you are in your car or something. But I'm sure you already have some great ideas for your story. | |
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