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Subject: Re: this took effing forever Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:18 pm
Biggest defect: Legs. They are too chubby and don't have a definite human shape. Her fringe/bangs: Where is their delicateness? The sides look quite accurately angled, like squared.. You don't want that. You need to make it more flowy and not stiff. Lips: Her whole body is facing to the the right side but the lips almost look as if they're facing the other way.. She has no collarbone. Her dress looks a bit strange because of the legs.. As if the dress is too short. Way too short. What's wrong with her feet? It doesn't look like she has any. Else they must be very flat? Her arms end very strangely behind her back. It's like she's got no hands either, if you examine at how they would look if she were facing her back to us. They're too chubby too.
Other than that, I love the way you colour and the way you drew the eyes. 6.5/10 for the effort :]