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PostSubject: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Wed Nov 23, 2011 6:45 am

Well, if there could be a lumpy space princess, why not a lumpy space human princess? So I decided to draw one. It's pretty plain, so give me some ideas and rate 0-10.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:43 am

7/10, not much detail, there is no star. there is no shading, and thats all. but thanks for the thought. People should respect LSP Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:48 am

I like it! But I have some critique.

~Maybe put some shine in her hair.
~Maybe color her eyes.
~Maybe outline the body.
~Maybe add a crown because of LSP's star.
~Maybe make her hair a little wavy, giving the effect of lumpiness.
~Maybe do some more realistic clothes.

I rate it 7/10. ◕3◕
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Thu Nov 24, 2011 6:21 am

Oh, okay guys! I'll get to work!

EDIT: I'm done! I added LOADS of other things. Here it is!

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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Thu Nov 24, 2011 8:59 am

The Hands look weird.
And Shade it
I made one here:
Rushed One:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:21 am

"Weird"?
And I did shade the top and pant, don't you see? (Bad type of shading awedhjqwefgbwhr)
[sarcasm] Thanks for the comment.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:38 am

It's rather cute.
But yeah, the hands are rather weird.

7.5/10 Much better than the first attempt
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:23 am

Okay then, I'll fix the hands. Thanks.

EDIT: here it is. I fixed the hands.

YES I KNOW ONE HAND IS SHORT AND THE OTHER LONG.
Don't need to comment on that.
@cutey_larl- even yours is a bit too blurry, and very plain.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:45 am

Ik its rushed one
the braclet is on the arm not hand.
and the fingers look weird
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:57 am

I've spent a lot of time on working on that, and I think it's good enough. The next time I edit it I don't want to hear, 'the whole picture looks weird!'!

Here is the last and final edit.


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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:48 pm

You guys act like you can do so much better. I'd like to see you make something like that without a tablet.
@Larl: Uhh, if it's a rushed work, why are you showing it? It's not making a good reference now is it?

I, for one, really like it. ^^ 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 12:59 pm

I agree with Taost. This is amazing work, especially considering that it was made without a tablet. The shading of her dress in the final edit is excellent, far better than I can do. 9/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:01 pm

it's actually not that hard @tosat and silmari and whatever
http://i40.tinypic.com/kdk1er.png
i mean, that one sucks too, and it's not coloured, but you just need to get a hang with the mouse.
I find this drawing a bit odd. the colouring isn't very good and it's sketchy and stuff. however, i really dislike how badly you're taking the critique. i like her design, though.
4.1/10.

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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:45 pm

Sorry for double posting there is a mixup with me.Btw I DONT want to be off topic so You drawing are nice!

Sooo sorry for double posting! Mad


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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 2:51 pm

-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
PLEASE STOP TRYING TO MAKE ME CHANGE IT. I've spent a lot of time on working on that, and I think it's good enough. The next time I edit it I don't want to hear, 'the whole picture looks weird!'! You've commented it once, now that's enough.

Here is the last and final edit.

Oh my gosh! Its so cool! I luv it! I know you worked hard....u worked to much....Keep up the GREAT work!
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 3:49 pm

cat 7/10 i mean Where ze' junk is the star ? xDD But its goood !
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:26 pm

Thanks, everyone! c: I'm feeling on top of the world right now!
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:05 pm

I like it.
It's cute. 7/10
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Fri Nov 25, 2011 11:41 pm

Alrighty! Guys, I just made some effect to it- sparkle. Here 'tis-
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:05 am

its really good. 8/10. how did you make the rainbow i like it, also the grass.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Nov 26, 2011 12:27 am

Thanks sherley ^^
I don't use paint, another program. There are some effects there, and among them's a rainbow. Soo...I put that.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:14 am

Do you use Tux Paint perhaps?
By the way I'd say 7.5/10 at your age. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:59 am

Fuko-Chan wrote:
Do you use Tux Paint perhaps?
By the way I'd say 7.5/10 at your age. ^^

Thanks!
Yeah I do, it's pretty good for all these pixels and drawings.
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Mon Nov 28, 2011 7:24 am

She scares me!
7.5/10.
Its good for your age!
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PostSubject: Re: Lumpy Space Human Princess   Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:44 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
She scares me!
7.5/10.
Its good for your age!
:(
I just can't see why you're being rude. No, Timegear was right- I didn't take the critique well, but you just can't have a doubt like "It's weird" "it scares me" or all that rubbish. It hurt my feelings. No offense done.
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