Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 16 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
Subject: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:50 pm
This is horrible. xD I was trying to draw a human woman (I found a photograph of one) and it ended up looking weird, especially the face. Can anyone give some critiques for this? I don't know what to fix but one of the eyes and nose, but that is just about it to me.
Posts : 9585 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 16 Location : i'm always watching
Subject: Re: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:22 pm
It's pretty good. :3 The outline of the eyes are a little too dark though. The nose's shape is awkward, & the bottom lip is a bit uneven. The neck is a little too thick, in my opinion. That's all I see, pretty much. I'd give it an 8; c:
Subject: Re: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:24 pm
8/10 This is superb. All though the base of the head is still noticeable and the lips are not the same on the right side. The nostrils are a bit wide (Unless you were heading for that.) and the fist isn't correctly proportioned.
You really improved though! You should make a shop. I love your drawings, keep making more!