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Winnowill
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PostSubject: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:31 pm

I'm sorry about the crappy line-work, I wish I had a tablet...

The reason I have not uploaded any artwork before is that my scanner has been broken for the past few months...gegh...

Anyway, constructive criticisms and ratings would be appreciated.



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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:19 am

It's pretty good for being your first digital work, and without a tablet to boot.

I assume you used Paint for Windows 7? It does look like that, so I wont nag you about layers. But honestly, I think Paint is still more suited to pixel art.

Constructive criticism:
You forgot the top of her head.
The shirt should go under the hair. As in coloring the shirt first, then the hair. Or fix the hair after coloring the shirt, that works too.
Maybe you should shade under the bangs?
Her head is kinda wide on one side.
The eye are kinda blocky, especially the pupils, so I'd suggest that you'd zoom in when drawing digitally, because it does look like you didn't. Zooming in tends to help a lot when drawing details and detailed things, such as eyes. I mean it.
And there is a rather large gap between the mouth and nose.

I hope you didn't find this too harsh. You did a good effort on it, I'll give you credit for that.
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Winnowill
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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:41 am

Thank you! I'll try to remember those next time...
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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:57 am

i say 10 but there is white specks that bother me. affraid What a Face
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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:15 am

I LOVE IT! cheers

10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:34 am

I love it!
But where's the top of her head/hair?\
The eyes are a tad bit blurry.....
One shirt side is larger then the other

8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:37 am

Hmm, the eyes look sort of pixely (did you use MS paint? This is great if you did!) and there's a large gap between the nose and mouth.

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PostSubject: Re: My first entirely digitally created artwork...   Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:39 am

Thank you guys! I will try to improve...
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