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PostSubject: A sketch...   Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:03 pm

A sketch of a face. I tried using my this new skill.

Rate & critique please!

I know her head is kind of circle -ish. I purposely didn't shade on this one.

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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:05 pm

8/10
o-o it looks like the hair is in the eyeball
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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:27 pm

I really like this, but it looks way too stereotypical. I see improvement.

The left yelash should be thicker, so it can represent a woman. The eyes are too far and too high. Use a base for a head, not just a random circle. The back of her hair looks like it has too much strands. I sugget looking at an anime drawing in back view for a reference. The lips are a teensy bit too high. The neck is a bit too skinny. Make it thicker, unless you want to represent someone weak. Look at the part where your head bends, start the neck there. Reference:
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See how the lady's neck starts a few centimeters from where her head bends? You should make the neck a bit more thick so it can look like that picture.


The nose is facing the wrong way. Reference:

See how the girl is facing forwards? Her nose isn't facing to the left or right. The should be lines on each side. (Yes, this is an anime-ish style.)

I really like this drawing, though. I see improvement. 8/10
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Also, I do not agree with Cake. That's a different style of anime. But the bangs do flow a little low.

This man's hair DOES go over his eye, but in this anime style the eye still shows...a bit transparent, though.
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As for this man, it's just a different style of anime.
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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Sun Dec 04, 2011 12:25 pm

@Toast. I agree with everything other than the eyelashes. i've drawn girls without eyelashes, it's still easy to tell they're a girl by their body and face. P:
just take the girls advice, but instead of anime references, use REAL references. these are way more helpful and can help you build your style.

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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Sun Dec 04, 2011 4:59 pm

Timegear wrote:
@Toast. I agree with everything other than the eyelashes. i've drawn girls without eyelashes, it's still easy to tell they're a girl by their body and face. P:
just take the girls advice, but instead of anime references, use REAL references. these are way more helpful and can help you build your style.

^^Ninja'd by Toast and Tim. :p


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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Sun Dec 04, 2011 5:16 pm

Timegear wrote:
@Toast. I agree with everything other than the eyelashes. i've drawn girls without eyelashes, it's still easy to tell they're a girl by their body and face. P:
just take the girls advice, but instead of anime references, use REAL references. these are way more helpful and can help you build your style.
Ah, well I make my eyelashes thick even if it's a girl or not. I just don't put as much eyelashes with a boy than I do with a girl. lul.
I also agree with using real references. There's all different types of styles. ;pp
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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:55 am

I agree with taost ^^
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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Mon Dec 05, 2011 6:20 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Timegear wrote:
@Toast. I agree with everything other than the eyelashes. i've drawn girls without eyelashes, it's still easy to tell they're a girl by their body and face. P:
just take the girls advice, but instead of anime references, use REAL references. these are way more helpful and can help you build your style.
Ah, well I make my eyelashes thick even if it's a girl or not. I just don't put as much eyelashes with a boy than I do with a girl. lul.
I also agree with using real references. There's all different types of styles. ;pp
style preference, silly to burst it onto people.

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PostSubject: Re: A sketch...   Mon Dec 05, 2011 6:36 pm

ppl its awesome
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