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PostSubject: Crit thread!   Fri Dec 09, 2011 9:55 pm

Post a link to some art you'd like critique on, I'd be happy to give it. WRITING ACCEPTED.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:18 pm

http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/343/7/4/merry_christmas_by_izuray-d4ina16.png Please do not critique on her legs. That's all I ask xDD
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:10 am

This. It's lineart. I'm practicing various poses to improve my anatomy. Apparently, me drawing males, fail.
Don't mind the weird arm position if it does look weird. I got full pose reference from a picture of me in that same position. The eyes, he's looking up. The jacket is weird because he's pulling on it with his hands.
Also, I drew with a mouse, just saying.. That's why it's no good |:
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 7:49 am

Thankyou for making this thread <3
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Okay I just did this for Mr.Taost in my drawing shop, soo.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:58 am

-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
Thankyou for making this thread <3
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Okay I just did this for Mr.Taost in my drawing shop, soo.
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Here Are the mistakes:
HERE!!:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 9:01 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Here Are the mistakes:
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The legs don't have to be crossed? They can be normal? -.-
And hands can't be so short, they have to be thigh length. That's how long mine are.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 12:29 pm

**cutey_larl** wrote:
-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
Thankyou for making this thread <3
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Okay I just did this for Mr.Taost in my drawing shop, soo.
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Here Are the mistakes:
HERE!!:
 


you should keep your inaccurate critique to yourself since this is makki's thread not yours
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 1:33 pm

Another Skipper drawing.
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Looks like someone got sprayed with water from the water breath.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 12, 2011 2:04 pm

@cutey_larl: Shut up.

Fuko-Chan's critique:
 
Sorry for blurriness, servimg was being stupid. Anyway, my own drawings suck, but hopefully they're enough to explain what's going on.

Miki-Lu's critique:
 
I didn't know how to help you, you're advanced enough to know what you're doing but not advanced enough to apply it. Sorry D:

Aubrey's critique:
 

SORRY FOR ALL THE TYPOS. MS Paint sucks :T
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:18 am

Abbey wrote:
**cutey_larl** wrote:
-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
Thankyou for making this thread <3
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Okay I just did this for Mr.Taost in my drawing shop, soo.
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Here Are the mistakes:
HERE!!:
 


you should keep your inaccurate critique to yourself since this is makki's thread not yours

Ohh I thought like anyone crit anyone's picture that needs to be crit
SORRY
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:47 am

THANK YOU MAKKINEE
I will definitely improve!
Another drawing I did;
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:49 am

Hiiiii~
o u o/ So I would like a crit on




Thanks~
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:17 pm

I saw u making this on ur thingy other than livestream I love it

10/10 Billeh

Please teach me ur wise ways :3
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:28 pm

stars186 wrote:
I saw u making this on ur thingy other than livestream I love it

10/10 Billeh

Please teach me ur wise ways :3


I would if I had the capability ;3
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:50 pm

Makkine wrote:

Miki-Lu's critique:
 
I didn't know how to help you, you're advanced enough to know what you're doing but not advanced enough to apply it. Sorry D:

Thank you, Makkine ;A;
I'm not sure how I'm going to use that advice you've given me, but at least I know where I went slightly wrong and I know how to avoid it the next time.
I've actually completed the pic. You see, the lineart was a bit incomplete on the mouth. I got kinda stuck in it as usual. The teeth. I take time drawing those.
In the end I just made the mouth closed as you see here xP
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Also the eyes, I'm not sure what you meant by 'drunk looking'. Maybe it's because there were no pupils or hints on where his eyes were focused. I usually add that detail as I'm colouring in.

Again. Thanks so much ;W;

P.S.: I forgot to add, he's around 13-15 ish. I haven't developed how to draw people at different ages, but I'll work on it once I've settled more into my own style :]
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 13, 2011 5:02 pm

Miki-lu wrote:
Makkine wrote:

Miki-Lu's critique:
 
I didn't know how to help you, you're advanced enough to know what you're doing but not advanced enough to apply it. Sorry D:

Thank you, Makkine ;A;
I'm not sure how I'm going to use that advice you've given me, but at least I know where I went slightly wrong and I know how to avoid it the next time.
I've actually completed the pic. You see, the lineart was a bit incomplete on the mouth. I got kinda stuck in it as usual. The teeth. I take time drawing those.
In the end I just made the mouth closed as you see here xP
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Also the eyes, I'm not sure what you meant by 'drunk looking'. Maybe it's because there were no pupils or hints on where his eyes were focused. I usually add that detail as I'm colouring in.

Again. Thanks so much ;W;

P.S.: I forgot to add, he's around 13-15 ish. I haven't developed how to draw people at different ages, but I'll work on it once I've settled more into my own style :]
By "drunk-looking", I mostly meant "unfocused". I don't usually do this, but if you still have difficulty making people look in the right direction, try making a small point on a layer above. Then you draw lines from that point to the iris/pupil. We don't have eyes just to look pretty, you know, they need to be looking somewhere.

As for where to use my advice, I actually think the most important piece I gave you is to not just focus on how to draw the individual pieces, but rather on how they fit together. The rest of it is secondary, and maybe even inaccurate. I'm just a theory nerd, guys, not an expert.

As for aging characters, the nose and the ears grow, and usually the neck becomes thicker, the shoulders grow wider. Not too much, mind you, but enough to show that this guy is entering puberty.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Sat Dec 17, 2011 1:39 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
Thankyou for making this thread <3
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Okay I just did this for Mr.Taost in my drawing shop, soo.
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Here Are the mistakes:
HERE!!:
 

Hehe. That's funny. You want Aubrey to give her stubby arms, and make Aubrey's drawing do "the potty dance". That's hilarious, how you tried to change it. But back to serious matters: It's not happening. Inaccurate critique.

By the way, it seems like you constantly try to find fault with Aubrey's art. Nobody is perfect at art, (but there is a girl I know who can actually draw hands) so knock it off.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:32 am

Thank you for that Hop <3
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OKAY are other drawings taken? For example a flower?
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Sun Dec 18, 2011 9:51 pm

May you critique this?:
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I have no idea what to do about the folds around the chest and stuff so I thought you could help me D;
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 19, 2011 6:17 am

Crit this please:
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:12 am

Can you critique this?
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:02 pm

@-♥Aubrey♥-: That's much better! Congrats. As for the butterfly, I unfortunately have no idea how butterflies work. Just look at a TON of references, and remember grass is more than a single line!

purplebunny16's critique:
 
Good luck finding your own style!

billehnessy's critique:
 
I honestly can't apologise enough for not being helpful.

For Serah:
 
Lucky you! I had actually made a bunch of references for clothing a while ago, so you get twice the help from me. I'm not sure if anything that's on that paper makes sense, so feel free to ask about it.
Serah's critique:
 
I'm actually pretty proud of the last drawing, even if it's a floating headless and legless torso that I drew in five seconds for a critique.
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:25 pm

Can I request another critique?

If so,
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Please do not critique on the coloring. Except for JUST the face. Like really, my own drawing creeps me out like heck. Q3Q And for everything else, just basically shape and stuff.
And I don't know what those lines are around the drawing. sorry otl
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:13 pm

I must say Makkine, I am learning a lot from the critique you give to others, you're awesome.

Can you critique this drawing I made in a shop?

it was for powerstay:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Crit thread!   Tue Dec 20, 2011 5:18 pm

oh god I feel as if alot of people are gonna feel hurt about this thread o-o

this pleeze:
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