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taehyung
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PostSubject: My Chibi Drawing   Tue Dec 13, 2011 10:32 am


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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:37 pm

4/10

The leg looks broken, The pose seems awkward to me too. Considering the legs that is. The mouth is weird and the neck is not anotomical considering the right side.


Other: she looks like a e3e.. to me.


continuing crit:
Her feet look weird too e.e..


Thats pretty much it.
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:35 am

Dude its my first time!!
and 4 mistakes it should not be 4/10
it should be 8/10 or 7.5/10
(Like just saying)
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:44 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Dude its my first time!!
and 4 mistakes it should not be 4/10
it should be 8/10 or 7.5/10
(Like just saying)
If you were asking for critique, you better dang well not be offensive. She's trying to help.

And it doesn't work that way, you just rate how it looks.
I say 4/10
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Wed Dec 14, 2011 6:55 am

Ok
I'll try to improve
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:37 pm

I think you should lengthen the arms a little bit because it looks like her arms were cut off with that pose.
8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:40 pm

That doesn't look like chibi to me...
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PostSubject: Re: My Chibi Drawing   Fri Dec 16, 2011 9:45 pm

Hrmm..

1. Her legs are crooked/broken. Thats 9/10 so far.

2. I cant tell what her face is. this: : D or this? C: i CAN'T TELL i have bad eyesight. 9.5/10

3. The pose is a bit sideways. 8/10.

4. Her feet are kind of chubby. 8.5/10

5. Her neck isn't right... 7/10



Good Job! 7/10 thats good you get a C still good C:
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