Fantage Contest thing outfit

Yeah, i know its disgusting, but mind pointing out the mistakes and teaching me? C:

7.6/10
-Both of the outfits have no neckhole, which EVERY outfit has to have.
-What is that thingy on their heads? Remove it. If it's a clip, try improving on it by adding that clip blady thingy.
-There is no shading in the hair or outfits.
-The girl's shading on the shoes look like a patch of cloth stitched over the other.

Still, pretty good. c:

-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:

7.6/10
-Both of the outfits have no neckhole, which EVERY outfit has to have.
-What is that thingy on their heads? Remove it. If it's a clip, try improving on it by adding that clip blady thingy.
-There is no shading in the hair or outfits.
-The girl's shading on the shoes look like a patch of cloth stitched over the other.

Still, pretty good. c:

thanks, but im new at shading :C
and doing pixel drawing thingies.

Good luck in the contest. I once won with a hand-drawn entry, and I have a cool medal as proof.

Here are the edits I suggest:

1.The hair is... awkward. Make sure they have a part, and that the hair is not too "flat".

2.Don't make the clothing too "Even Steven". If you notice, when somebody has pants or shirts on, it is not perfectly alligned.

3. the boy's shoes are pretty good, just don't make the heels too round.
On the girl, apparently you gave her flats. make them a bit smaller, not so huge.

4. I added sleeves on the girl's dress, since I am the type of person to wear sleeves, but you don't have to have them.

Thats all.

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