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|Subject: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:57 am|| |
Yepp That's my improvement
I allow Rates and Critiques !
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:20 pm|| |
Why is her hair in the back of her eye? And it looks like you took the eyes off another chibi
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:24 pm|| |
Her head looks at a degree angle. You probably shouldve covered part of the eye where the bangs are placeed.
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:06 pm|| |
- ♥mjrox♥ wrote:
- Why is her hair in the back of her eye? And it looks like you took the eyes off another chibi
I don't think she took it. It just looks like she is trying to draw like Abbey, which isn't bad.
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:14 pm|| |
Her face isn't centered
her eye is like floating in front of her bangs xD
The hair doesn't appear natural, where the hair is brought up together, it looks to skinny when compared to the hair flowing down from the pony tail.
Her right shoulder is higher up than her left
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 1:19 pm|| |
~ No eyebrows or nose..
~ The bangs look kinda funky when they're transparent like that.
~ The head is really round
~ The eyes look like they should be a little farther down
But I must say, the hair/ponytail is pretty good! So is from the neck down :3
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:22 pm|| |
It's cute! I see improvement. However, don't draw the eye over top of the hair, draw it over so it covers the eye. c:
The neck is also short, and the face is very round...Faces are not circles, they are more ovals with distinct chins.
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:34 pm|| |
The eyes are too over to the right compared to where the face is positioned on the neck.
The left side (her right-hand side) of the face (the jawbone) is out too much (too large) comparing to the other.
Mouth is in a most inhuman position.
Face structure too round/long
Hair should be over the eye. OR the hair should be semi-transparent so that you can see the eye BUT still see that the hair is over it.
Ponytail joint is too high on the head.. I'd find it really uncomfortable /:
There are again, no EYEBROWSSSSSS. Means zombie/drunk or a face with no expression to me. D:
Yes. Eyebrows are extremely important. Unless you meant for her to have her eyebrows shaved of or something.
I see improvement though. Well done ^ v ^
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:01 am|| |
The eyes aren't centered
The eye is on the hair which makes it look like you copy and pasted the eye
The hair is too high on top and the lower bit looks unnatural
But overall well done 7/10
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|Subject: Re: My Improvement Chibi Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:33 am|| |
The right eye is very, very, very weird.
The bang you drew should go over the eye and not under. There are no lashes or eyebrows, and the smile and face is at a crooked angle. The eyes are not at the same level, either.
But other than that, it's a very good one so 7/10. ^^
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