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sherley739
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PostSubject: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:53 pm

hey so i havnt posted art in a while....so I here by present miss faye tande..shes a character of mine........ waring her outfit shows her tomach and thats it....im pretty sure all of u have seen a stomach before dont go making a big deal out of it...please rate 1-10 and enjoy Smile

OPTINAL...read about her..picture it and then tell me if you imagined her as is..
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PostSubject: Re: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:11 pm

Good, but she's kinda too skinny or is she suppose to be like that? xD

So I will give it a 9.9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:22 pm

Awesome, but I would suggest you make your character's...melons (lol?) a bit loose rather than having them stick up. Also, she looks a bit too skinny, make her legs, arms, and waist thicker, and the neck thinner.
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PostSubject: Re: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:05 pm

Mr.Taost wrote:
Awesome, but I would suggest you make your character's...melons (lol?) a bit loose rather than having them stick up. Also, she looks a bit too skinny, make her legs, arms, and waist thicker, and the neck thinner.

okay Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:08 pm

To me everything but the neck and torso looks fine, because the neck is sort of shaped like this:
/ \ in the drawing, and it should be more even.
the torso is looking REALLY skinny, like she has no ribs D:
but the arms and legs seem fine...

9/10 Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )   Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:45 pm

That's really awesome! Her outfit is really interesting, that's something I have a hard time with, lol. The only thing that looked strange to me was the mouth, the line art should have been either erased entirely or completed.
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