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Daisy
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PostSubject: Love Story Part 2   Tue Dec 27, 2011 2:22 am

Hello everyone you didnt read the part one? so this is the link:
Love story part 1
and theres a video version of this too but not done yet i am still finding some actors for the video so heres the link of the video
CLICK here if you want to join the movie

Now i'll start the Story

( Daniel Texted Kathy)

Daniel: Im so sorry Kathy It was my fault
Kathy: No Irs not your fault,even its your fault i still love you.
Daniel: I love you Kathy
Kathy: I love you too

( Kathy go down and talk to her parents )

Kathy: I am very sorry mom and dad I promise i wont do it again, but i need to go school because i dont want to get F
Mom: um m hmmmm Yeah Hun she better go to school so that she wont get F because in the class shes 1st
Kathy:yeah, Mom is right dad, Please dad!
Dad: Let me think

( EVERYONES QUIET )

Dad:Okey tomorrow you will be in school but you are not allowed to meet Daniel and your still grounded, UNDERSTAND?!?!?
Kathy: ErR. Okey.
Mom: Now go to bed you need to sleep early because you will wake up early tomorrow
Kathy: Okey mom
(Kathy run fast upstairs and texted Daniel and Victoria)

Kathy: yay! Mom and dad allow me to go school! yay!
Victoria: Really? Thats great!
Daniel: Really! oh god thank you! I love you Kathy
Kathy: I love you to

(mom go upstairs and open the door of Kathy and Kathy keep her cellphone fast)

Kathy: Mo Mom What are you doing here?
Mom: kathy Let me talk to you a second
Kathy: o o okey mom
Mom: Kathy, its okey you can meet daniel but dont really stick to him maybe he is just playing you.
Kathy: Mom, Daniel is not like that i know him.
Mom: are you really sure you know him? now go to sleep.
Kathy okey mom

( Kathy Wake up and change clothes same as Daniel doing)
(Kathy go down and said)

Kathy: Mom i need to go bye!
Mom: Okey be careful

SCHOOL!

Kathy: Hi Victoria!
Victoria: Hi Kathy!, How are you?
Kathy: I am good! you?
Victoria: same!, Lets go to classroom now because the bell is ringing
Kathy: Okey.

CLASSROOM!

(Kathy and Daniel Meet)

Daniel: Hi Kathy
Kathy: Hello Daniel.
Daniel: I miss you Kathy, After school can i meet you in Carnival?
Kathy: Sure! i really love the Carnival.

(FEW HOURS LATER)

Teacher: Now you may go home.

SUDENTS: YAY!

Daniel: See you later Kathy
Kathy: Okey
Victoria:Kathy lets go home together.
Kathy: Sure!

( Kathy is already home also Victoria)

Kathy: Mom Dad I am home
Mom: good.
Kathy: Mom I have a group study today can i go with them? maybe ill go home little late.
Mom: Okey sweetie But be careful okey?

( Kathy Run fast upstairs and change clothes and go down)

Mom: You look Great Kathy.
Kathy: Thank you mom. I need to go Bye!

(Daniel Home)

Daniel: Mom Dad I am home!.
Dad: Good.
Mom: Eat your breakfast Daniel.
Daniel: Mom I am going to my friend Benjamin's house and he will have a party and he invite me, can i go mom?
Mom: Sure but be careful
Daniel: Yeh. Mom but i am gonna be little lates its okey?
Dad: Its okey if you go to Benjamin's house not to meet kathy.
Daniel: I promise.
( Change clothes )
Daniel: Need to go bye mom and dad.
Mom: Okey

Daniel go to Carnival Fast.
Kathy is waiting for Daniel.

Kathy and Daniel play the games in Carnival and watch some animals.
They walk together with holding hands.
And they decide to go in the beach and see the moonlight.

Kathy: Wow the moon is so Bright
Daniel: Yeah.. Do you love it?
Kathy: yeah I love it ( And K!ss Daniel)
Daniel: oh! your so sweet Kathy.

Guys this is for today! tomorrow again! Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story Part 2   Wed Dec 28, 2011 5:20 am

Don't do you think its bit rushing?
first you should make how did they met make the story like makes the reader one of them!
(that what the teacher told us XP)
But its really nice.
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PostSubject: Re: Love Story Part 2   Wed Dec 28, 2011 8:14 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Don't do you think its bit rushing?
first you should make how did they met make the story like makes the reader one of them!
(that what the teacher told us XP)
But its really nice.

Thank you. i am making now the first very first eehehehehe Very Happy
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