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PostSubject: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:18 pm

Yeah, i needed to draw a superhero for an art sketch that's due Jan 5th.
So crititque and rate.

Please don't critique:
unusual head shape
leaning forward
half body
no shading (I'm shading later)

thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:37 pm

It's so cute I love sailor moon 10/10!
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 12:43 pm

Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:24 pm

Here's my critique: she looks a bit fat, it looks like her fingers are stuck to her arm instead of her hand kind of thing, her neck looks kind of straight. I think that's all avoiding the things not to critique.

I'll give it a 6.8/10?

It's pretty cute. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:39 pm

her arms are to skinny her bodice is fine
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:41 pm

This looks beautiful! Her outfit and hair perfectly match how they appear in the anime, which is awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:47 pm

wellll id give it a 7/10
~critique~
i really like the hair,eye, and outfit...they are verry vute...but you might want to work on anotomy or body propotions because to my tast the body looks deformed... if you want some practice with anotomy i reccomend using posemanicas...thats a practice place....other than that its really good ....sorry if this critique was to harsh ....youve got alot of potential so keep it up and good luck
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:54 pm

@everyone about the body

i just followed this picture:

This one:
 

I had problems with the peace fingers...
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:18 pm

Thats pretty good!
Im not going to critique, just cuz im not the best drawer myself.
But rate: 7/10
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PostSubject: Re: Sailor Moon Art Sketch   Mon Jan 02, 2012 1:38 pm

Thats really good!!! Other than the leaning (which you told us not to critique about) you did really good! I don't have any problems with the drawing at all. Keep continuing to sketch it and don't let other people let you down by saying it's really ugly because it's not! Good luck! Wink
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