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PostSubject: Pokemon Fan-Fic.   Sun Jan 08, 2012 8:38 am

Note: This is a Pokemon Fan-Fic. Everything in here won't be the same as the real Pokemon.

I am aiming to get really far with this.
I just started a story for Pokemon. Some of you think Pokemon is for little kids.
But I like it. Enjoy.
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2: Coming soon.
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PostSubject: Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic.   Sun Jan 08, 2012 11:18 am

This is cute! I like it so far. Am I allowed to criticize? The only criticism I have is that the events are moving too rapidly. Try adding some detail, or describing a little more. You also switched to the second person rather abruptly in the second paragraph.
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PostSubject: Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic.   Mon Jan 09, 2012 5:01 pm

I totally read the ending's questions in the original Pokemon [the tv show] narrator's voice. x]
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