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01sparkly Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 680 Join date : 2011-07-12 Age : 24 Location : Somewhere where you will never know O.o
| Subject: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:35 pm | |
| Please tell me on things I could improve on. (IN A NICE WAY PLEASE !) I know it's not very good. Ok here it is. EDIT: If you say I could improve at shading I'm not good at it... So yeah just stating a fact Another edit xP: It's my first one too (I used paint) | |
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Mila Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017 Join date : 2011-09-01
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:37 pm | |
| your a little shaky in your drawing. i am always is shaky (because i have a laptop). So do you have laptop or computer?
Last edited by FantageLuver on Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:16 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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01sparkly Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 680 Join date : 2011-07-12 Age : 24 Location : Somewhere where you will never know O.o
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 3:39 pm | |
| Computer xP. Ikr it's tricky | |
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Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:47 pm | |
| I love it! I dont think you should change anything! | |
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01sparkly Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 680 Join date : 2011-07-12 Age : 24 Location : Somewhere where you will never know O.o
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:59 pm | |
| Ty!!! | |
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rockinraspberry Regular Fantagian
Posts : 184 Join date : 2012-03-16 Location : Y do ya wanna know STALKER?!
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:37 pm | |
| maybe just add sum accesories to complete da outfit. But daffs all <33 ing da paint qurl | |
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01sparkly Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 680 Join date : 2011-07-12 Age : 24 Location : Somewhere where you will never know O.o
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:38 pm | |
| Ty xDD lol it took me a whole day :3 | |
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rockinraspberry Regular Fantagian
Posts : 184 Join date : 2012-03-16 Location : Y do ya wanna know STALKER?!
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Sun Mar 18, 2012 5:38 pm | |
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Pieee Senior Fantagian
Posts : 313 Join date : 2011-12-10 Location : drowning
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Mon Mar 19, 2012 1:49 am | |
| That's awesome I really like it | |
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I Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 600 Join date : 2011-11-07 Age : 22 Location : im in dh's house and im r2p11-1 him.
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Mon Mar 19, 2012 2:27 am | |
| mine is alot worser than yours, lol. | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Mon Mar 19, 2012 3:15 am | |
| Dat's a nice drawing. c: 10/10. | |
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01sparkly Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 680 Join date : 2011-07-12 Age : 24 Location : Somewhere where you will never know O.o
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Mon Mar 19, 2012 4:41 am | |
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dana scully Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3497 Join date : 2012-03-08 Age : 24 Location : the void
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 11:22 am | |
| its good. I could never do that on a computer it would be really messy! | |
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Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:31 pm | |
| did you use the curve tool?? if you did it would be wayyyyyy cleaner! its actually really good.
but the shirt needs a BIT more shading. And you don't need to fill it in much:)
EDIT: where did you get the template?? | |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:02 pm | |
| The drawing is really pretty, I like your shading. my only suggestion is adding a nose, and maybe some colour to the eyes. | |
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SammiiGoesRawrr Junior Fantagian
Posts : 55 Join date : 2012-03-16 Age : 25 Location : Somewhere.
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 2:32 pm | |
| I Like It. Maybe Color For The Eyes, But Everything Else Is Good. | |
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vineland1234 Junior Fantagian
Posts : 89 Join date : 2012-03-19 Age : 24 Location : Look at your bathroom. Im doing gangnam style
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:12 pm | |
| ITS not bad! ITS nice!!! | |
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vineland1234 Junior Fantagian
Posts : 89 Join date : 2012-03-19 Age : 24 Location : Look at your bathroom. Im doing gangnam style
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:13 pm | |
| REALLY it is -_- | |
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Tue Mar 20, 2012 10:00 pm | |
| - Misty Life wrote:
- EDIT: where did you get the template??
In the Fanart section of the "Comet" (you know, Fantage's weekly newsletter) go to the submission tab. Find the instructions, and you should be able to click a button to download it. - If you don't understand, click this (sorry the images are large):
To print it out (if you are going to be hand-drawing the clothing and hair), just open the file in MS paint or any simple paint program and click the print button. | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!! Featured User
Posts : 4132 Join date : 2011-06-01 Location : derp
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Wed Mar 21, 2012 12:43 am | |
| I like the way you have shaded the character but: - Suggestions:
-Use the curve tool for the hair, it makes it look a lot more cleaner - Get rid of that curvy bump on the left hand - Shade the eyes - Get rid of that grey part behind her shorts - Use the curve tool for your shoes
8/10, hope that helped c: | |
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Cheesey Regular Fantagian
Posts : 139 Join date : 2012-03-16 Location : Umm.. In my Bff's socks drawer just waiting for the right time to prance out
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Wed Mar 21, 2012 1:12 am | |
| no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad | |
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Usui Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275 Join date : 2011-09-09 Age : 24 Location : Worldbuscus
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:39 am | |
| - FantageParis wrote:
- no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
You know how rude that really sounds? Could you do any better? Anyway. I like the hair you drew but its a little rough, and not a lot of shading. 8.3/10 nice job though. :3 | |
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Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Wed Mar 21, 2012 5:46 am | |
| - FantageParis wrote:
- no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
GOD!! We have little kids on this forum! Fantagelovezz, you just created this account to break rules, didn't you? Also, didn't she say to critique in a nice way? | |
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I Devoted Fantagian
Posts : 600 Join date : 2011-11-07 Age : 22 Location : im in dh's house and im r2p11-1 him.
| Subject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:57 am | |
| - FantageParis wrote:
- no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
Just stfu you lil bish im sure you can do worser than that oh and stfu stop trying to get attention you liar rulebreaker you 三八 | |
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