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PostSubject: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 9:11 am

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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 10:48 am

I rotated it for you.
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 1:09 pm

I really love the way you drew the hair, with the texture. The position of the mouth is a little strange though, when compared with the rest of her face.
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 1:19 pm

I like the hair a lot.
and the shading of the neck.
the right shoulder is a little sharp, i don't know if that's her pose though.
the neck is long, and I think her chest area looks awkward..

But everybody has their own style of drawing.
It looks good, in my eyes! xD

I give an 8 out of ten because of the lack of face shading.
The pig tails don't have a separating line, just shading.
So it looks like a type of hair cut, instead of pig tails.
and the bow looks like it's in an odd place. Like it's just hanging there.

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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 6:38 pm

The hair is real nice, keep drawing like that! :]
Her eyes seem alright, they just look a bit odd. I think her neck is a bit large, and her shoulders are in an awkward position, along with her neck. It lokos kinda curved. Her mouth is facign to the side, too. Her arms look kinda smushed to her body, too.

It's nice though, ecspescially for someone that improved so much. I'd give it a nine out of ten. :3
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 7:20 pm

Your drawing is amazing. I love her hair and her shirt. Although her neck is quite long and her lips look rather weird. But this is truly amazing keep up the good work! (:
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 8:37 pm

ITS AWESUM
and has a normal sized head!!! (unlike me Embarassed Razz silent bounce )
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeMon Jan 23, 2012 8:52 pm

I love the hair!
Critique/s: Lips are in the wrong spot, sideways
chest area needs to be sticking out. You know..
Shoulders curved, not point
Neck needs to be shorter
8.5/10
Your improving!!
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeThu Jan 26, 2012 3:03 pm

Why larl, this is beautiful. I definitely see improvement :3

The only real problems I see are, the neck length, it's rather long xD and her left shoulder, it's kinda crooked.


The hair is gorgeous, the mouth is better than what I can do and I like the eyes, even if they seem a bit misplaced when compared to the head.

Very well done 8/10 :3
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeThu Jan 26, 2012 10:55 pm

I dont find the neck tall. i think it fits it
Thanks for the crits i will try to improve more.....
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeThu Jan 26, 2012 10:59 pm

I like how the eyes and the hair is sorta... anime-ish. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeThu Jan 26, 2012 11:04 pm

WHOA!!!!!!! i cant even draw good lke that but i have one thing for u and that is SUPER EPIC SKINY JEANS GIRL LOVE DA HAIR!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeThu Jan 26, 2012 11:05 pm

O u O o3o EPIC HAIR +_+ keeps eyes open +_+

YOSHI O u O
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2012 12:00 am

I could never draw that good. ;P
You're better than I am at drawing.

BE PROOOOUDDD.
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2012 3:15 am

The hair is great, the right shoulder is pretty sharp and the mouth is a little strange. But your drawing have definitely improved.
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PostSubject: Re: My Drawing   My Drawing Icon_minitimeFri Jan 27, 2012 12:37 pm

N wrote:
The hair is real nice, keep drawing like that! :]
Her eyes seem alright, they just look a bit odd. I think her neck is a bit large, and her shoulders are in an awkward position, along with her neck. It lokos kinda curved. Her mouth is facign to the side, too. Her arms look kinda smushed to her body, too.

It's nice though, ecspescially for someone that improved so much. I'd give it a nine out of ten. :3

What she said. Job well done, Larl. (:
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