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PostSubject: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:22 pm

So i finally learned to work a scanner... and well I decide to post a picture I drew today on the bus xD

Might be large lol:
 

Please rate and critique. I'm a beginner to lighting and shading... and I know that. But my mother is helping me out with that stuff so I think I'll get better :3

Oh and please for the love of god. If you're going to give it a amazingly high or low rating TELL ME WHY! That's right you can't just say "AMAZING LIHJKLERBGF 10/10" If you were going to do that get out now :P

I work hard and I know I'm not perfect and when people give me that type of rating it really annoys me. It makes me think they weren't paying attention to the drawing at all :<

Oh and no fighting please... if someone didn't read than don't sweat it >;3
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 2:27 pm

Hrm... you made this on the bus..? do you have to wait long? o-o if not that is amazing.

it takes only 5 mintues for me to get home from the bus.

I don't see any mistakes ohwaiy.

Nope no mistakes C: 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:03 pm

Elise_wubz_chu_teddy :D wrote:
Hrm... you made this on the bus..? do you have to wait long? o-o if not that is amazing.

it takes only 5 mintues for me to get home from the bus.

My bus ride is about 20 minutes actually... If that was done in 5 minutes... I'd be throwing a party lol
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:15 pm

This is amazing relora I see no mistakes 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:59 pm

It's beautiful. Except the eyes are to wide
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 4:02 pm

That looks adorable. :3

I only see a few mistakes, and that is the height of the nose, I'm pretty sure it's not that far away from the mouth, and the height of the eyes, which I at least think should be slightly lowered. But other than that, this is good, and as you're already getting help with the shading, I will not critique that.

I'll give you a 9/10. :)
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:07 pm

Magdaleena wrote:
That looks adorable. :3

I only see a few mistakes, and that is the height of the nose, I'm pretty sure it's not that far away from the mouth, and the height of the eyes, which I at least think should be slightly lowered. But other than that, this is good, and as you're already getting help with the shading, I will not critique that.

I'll give you a 9/10. :)


Thank you very much.

I always seem to mess my face up when it comes to where everything is placed. But practice makes perfect and I'm sure I'll get used to placing eyes and noses and mouths correctly after a while :3

Thanks for the compliments guys. It's much appreciated ^^
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Wed Jan 18, 2012 5:15 pm

You have a beautiful style...

Like Magdaleena said, the only problem I can see is with the position of her facial features.
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Thu Jan 19, 2012 2:56 pm

Silmaril wrote:
You have a beautiful style...

Like Magdaleena said, the only problem I can see is with the position of her facial features.

Thank yous :3

I'm working more on facial features now that I think it's an area that must be looked up on... I also need to learn how to draw a nose from when you facing a person in the face Like when you're looking at someone directly... if anyone could help that be great :D
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:00 pm

Very cool relora

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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:01 pm

It is awesome... you are so skilled! I draw Neopets and that's IT. I can't draw anything else at all. Good work!
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Thu Jan 19, 2012 3:43 pm

Thats really good relora! C:

The nose is a bit far from the mouth, but other than that its awesome.
10/10.
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PostSubject: Re: hey hey hey :D   Thu Jan 19, 2012 5:13 pm

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
It is awesome... you are so skilled! I draw Neopets and that's IT. I can't draw anything else at all. Good work!


Thanks for the compliment, Actually I started out drawing littlest per shop toys (in a cartoon style of course) Than I moved on to my barbie dolls (LOL) and than I just started to work from their. Sometimes it's good to start with the simple :3



ashley123 wrote:
Thats really good relora! C:

The nose is a bit far from the mouth, but other than that its awesome.
10/10.

Thanks :D

And Yea, I can be pretty bad at my facial features position. Another thing I hate would be necks and eyes. I can never get eyes to match and my necks take forever to make acceptable lol.

Oh and shading and lighting isn't easy for me. But My picture came out real exposed. Half of those dark and light spots don't even come and pop out in my drawing when I hold it lol, apparently I need to be more careful.
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