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 Rolling Breeze [Story]

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Karen
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PostSubject: Rolling Breeze [Story]   Sat Apr 17, 2010 9:00 pm

Chapter 1: The round, golden thing

As the breeze was rolling across the field, I felt a slight whoosh run down my spine. A shiver ran past my body as I saw a golden shape I could hardly see. I squinted, and trundled along the grains to see what it was. It was a round golden thing. Literally, I thought it was a round golden thing. As I tried to pick it up, something stopped me from touching it. As if a force field was around the round, golden thing. I tried again, and my hand seemed to slip past its force field. The second I had touched it, there was a warm breeze fluttering by my skin. It felt as if it was... Inside of me. What is that? I was thinking. That very second, sand got in my eyes, and I blinked. When I opened my eyes once again, the golden thing vanished.

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PostSubject: Re: Rolling Breeze [Story]   Sun Apr 18, 2010 7:52 am

kool story i cant wait for chapter2
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PostSubject: Re: Rolling Breeze [Story]   Sun Apr 18, 2010 10:04 am

OMG! thats is really cool!!! i want to see Chapter two pronto, Lol

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