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PostSubject: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:01 pm

I think its for Sugar Lime.
I know its unfitting but itll be fitting once the plot OPENS.
DUNDUNDUN.

As we stare, through broken, windows.
And the lullaby you hum.
As I try, to solve the riddle.
Of you.
Mysteries before our eyes,
you still sing me, the lullaby.
Memories still make me cry.

What about you?

Do you regret your future?
Do you regret your past?
These never ensing questions, last.

The broken windows creaking,
and shattering all at once.

People say im invincible,
but at times I feel invisible.

In.
This.
World.

"We all have issues"
You once told me,
you hold my hand

So I wouldnt flee.

Was that the night?
I fell in love....

But times have changed!
And your insane!

Im going mad!
Just a tad.

The shattered window,
looks at me.

I crack it all,
so I can see.

...

Pull out the pigtails,
from my hair,

Regrest the past.
But do you care?

Your still mine,
you'll always be.

A gentle smile,
I used to see.

No window at all,
and I dont care.
The lullabys gone.

Im out of air.
...

Walk out of the house,
and say to myself,
"This is all your fault"
But do I really care?


The lonley gray,
the shining green.
...
Tears slowly fall.

They touch the grass.
And stay.
...

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:22 pm

You wrote that?
If you did, that's a great song.
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:25 pm

iRock1414 wrote:
You wrote that?
If you did, that's a great song.

You bet I did!
Very Happy
And thanks Cammy.
:3

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 6:40 pm

Thats really good Sunny!

I really like it :3
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:26 pm

Dankies straw.
I just improvised it.
XD

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:31 pm

I'm jealous. I can sing, I can write stories, but I can't write songs. So thats led me to sing your song over and over and over.... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:17 pm

2008sarah wrote:
I'm jealous. I can sing, I can write stories, but I can't write songs. So thats led me to sing your song over and over and over.... Very Happy

Really?
epic!
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Thu Apr 22, 2010 11:00 am

wow you sure do have talent XD it reminded me so much of sugar lime XD
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Thu Apr 22, 2010 3:41 pm

wow thats really goood!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:40 pm

great song!! its great!!
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:32 pm

Im glad you like it.Smile
Thank you all!

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:47 am

Ish is AMAZING!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Sat Apr 24, 2010 3:57 pm

Dankiez poke!
:DD

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:26 pm

I can't belive you wrote this song xD I lurv it.
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:39 pm

OMG Its Wonderful! I Cant belive you wrote that! ek ITS AWESOME!
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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Mon May 10, 2010 6:02 pm

aw, thanks everyone.
:3
I plan of singing it and publishing it on youtube.
Should I?

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PostSubject: Re: Song I made.   Mon May 10, 2010 7:00 pm

Yeah You need too! maybe someone famous will contact you to sing that for them that would be so awesome right!
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