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PostSubject: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:17 pm

Kesha1658s/Marci's/Pipers art thread

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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 12:37 pm

I'm critiquing.
.on the first 3 digital drawings, something is really wrong with their eyes.
. Some heads are complete circles, others are very square.
. They have no feet, eyebrows or fingers.
. The drawing of "brondie" is a little..... disturbing.
. The torsos are very long.
. There is one girl eating her arm!!
. The hair in like, a rectangle.
. The arms are very long and awkward looking.
. Hamsters do not have tails.
. The bride has only one sleeve and her bangs are very odd looking.
. And what happened to NOSES?!?!
The recolours are okay, though. I rate 1/10.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 7:48 pm

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
I'm critiquing.
.on the first 3 digital drawings, something is really wrong with their eyes.
. Some heads are complete circles, others are very square.
. They have no feet, eyebrows or fingers.
. The drawing of "brondie" is a little..... disturbing.
. The torsos are very long.
. There is one girl eating her arm!!
. The hair in like, a rectangle.
. The arms are very long and awkward looking.
. Hamsters do not have tails.
. The bride has only one sleeve and her bangs are very odd looking.
. And what happened to NOSES?!?!
The recolours are okay, though. I rate 1/10.

.... u have NOTHING positive to frikkin say!!!
1 the first 3s eyes are supossed to look like that i made them look like charlie browns
2 i know that. the circular ones i made when i was 7
3 cuz there chibis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4 brondie?? thats avril lavigine!
5 i knowwww
6 no shes not! shes holding a root beer bottle
7 so??
8 so??
9 yes they do
10 i know that and so??
11 I DONT LIKE NOSES!!
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:00 pm

kesha1658 wrote:
Yuffiecrystal wrote:
I'm critiquing.
.on the first 3 digital drawings, something is really wrong with their eyes.
. Some heads are complete circles, others are very square.
. They have no feet, eyebrows or fingers.
. The drawing of "brondie" is a little..... disturbing.
. The torsos are very long.
. There is one girl eating her arm!!
. The hair in like, a rectangle.
. The arms are very long and awkward looking.
. Hamsters do not have tails.
. The bride has only one sleeve and her bangs are very odd looking.
. And what happened to NOSES?!?!
The recolours are okay, though. I rate 1/10.

.... u have NOTHING positive to frikkin say!!!
1 the first 3s eyes are supossed to look like that i made them look like charlie browns
2 i know that. the circular ones i made when i was 7
3 cuz there chibis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4 brondie?? thats avril lavigine!
5 i knowwww
6 no shes not! shes holding a root beer bottle
7 so??
8 so??
9 yes they do
10 i know that and so??
11 I DONT LIKE NOSES!!

Just ignore her and her inaccurate critique.

These drawings are cute, but they seem old. Do you have any recent drawings that we can see? Just wondering.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:05 pm

yea just a few ill post em in a sec
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:36 pm

kesha1658 wrote:
Yuffiecrystal wrote:
I'm critiquing.
.on the first 3 digital drawings, something is really wrong with their eyes.
. Some heads are complete circles, others are very square.
. They have no feet, eyebrows or fingers.
. The drawing of "brondie" is a little..... disturbing.
. The torsos are very long.
. There is one girl eating her arm!!
. The hair in like, a rectangle.
. The arms are very long and awkward looking.
. Hamsters do not have tails.
. The bride has only one sleeve and her bangs are very odd looking.
. And what happened to NOSES?!?!
The recolours are okay, though. I rate 1/10.

.... u have NOTHING positive to frikkin say!!!
1 the first 3s eyes are supossed to look like that i made them look like charlie browns
2 i know that. the circular ones i made when i was 7
3 cuz there chibis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4 brondie?? thats avril lavigine!
5 i knowwww
6 no shes not! shes holding a root beer bottle
7 so??
8 so??
9 yes they do
10 i know that and so??
11 I DONT LIKE NOSES!!
That isn't a very good way to accept critique. It is meant to help you. But in this case, the critique offered wasn't very helpful, and is more criticism than a critique. Ignore and move on. But if someone IS trying to help you, don't just say "IT'S MY STYLE? SO!" that's a very beginner excuse.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Sun Feb 19, 2012 8:41 pm

i knooooooooooo..................
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:11 am

If you don't like noses how do you smell? or breathe with your mouth shut? And I did compliment your recolours. And if it was Avril Lavigine why on earth did you write Brondie? What does that even mean? And charlie brown's eyes don't look like that. And I don't see a root beer bottle.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:16 am

i didnt write Brondie i dont even kno who tht us
and the RB is cuz i didnt color it ZOOM IN
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:23 am

The girl in the pink and black, with pigtails. Looks like she's eating something. Underneath in pink letters is B-R-O-N-D-I-E. Or maybe I misread. The handwriting is odd.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:41 am

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
If you don't like noses how do you smell? or breathe with your mouth shut? And I did compliment your recolours. And if it was Avril Lavigine why on earth did you write Brondie? What does that even mean? And charlie brown's eyes don't look like that. And I don't see a root beer bottle.

I think Kesha misunderstood you when you said "Brondie". Her name is "Brandie", the a is tricky to see. The Avril Lavigne one is one of her traditional drawings, and it says "Avril Lavigne" above it. I honestly don't see any of her drawings holding a root beer bottle, but the one you said is eating her hand is probably swaying her arms in some sort of dance.

There. Now, is that cleared up?
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:49 am

Yes. Thanks, hop.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 10:50 am

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
Yes. Thanks, hop.

No problem.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:22 am

Oh god. First of all, That's not critique, It's criticism. If you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything at all. yadda yadda yadda. Second of all, don't tell Kesha how to react. If she doesn't want to ignore her, she doesn't have to. And last. These drawings are really cute! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 11:30 am

i love them, the recolors are so awesome. my only thing is the heads on ur drawings are shaped weirdly but there supper cute. i love the prom ones Smile nice job.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:40 pm

I like them. Especially the Brandie one its cute. I love all of them they rock
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 12:42 pm

I hav nevr seen bettr
1000000/10
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:25 pm

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
I'm critiquing.
.on the first 3 digital drawings, something is really wrong with their eyes.
. Some heads are complete circles, others are very square.
. They have no feet, eyebrows or fingers.
. The drawing of "brondie" is a little..... disturbing.
. The torsos are very long.
. There is one girl eating her arm!!
. The hair in like, a rectangle.
. The arms are very long and awkward looking.
. Hamsters do not have tails.
. The bride has only one sleeve and her bangs are very odd looking.
. And what happened to NOSES?!?!
The recolours are okay, though. I rate 1/10.
Actually, hamsters do have tails, its just hidden in their fur.
I have a hamster.
You don't know what perception she's going for, and it looks pretty much like she's going for chibi , which looks like she's doing a great job so far.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 3:58 pm

Sorry, I just can't except the absence of hands, feet, eyebrows, noses and ears.


I will, however rate ONLY the recolours 9/10. How long does it take to do that?
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:25 pm

Yuffiecrystal wrote:
Sorry, I just can't except the absence of hands, feet, eyebrows, noses and ears.


I will, however rate ONLY the recolours 9/10. How long does it take to do that?
Well hands and feet are actually very hard to draw. Even artists with tons of experience have a rough time drawing them :\.


7/10 for the drawings and 9/10 for the recolors :3.
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 4:57 pm

^ THANK YUH!!!

@yuffie if ur hate it thats ur prob!!!
dont take it out on the artist!! i do chibis, NOT ANIME its hard for me
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 5:38 pm

I think the chibis are actually pretty good even if they don't have noses or hands
9/10 for chibis 10/10 for recolors
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 5:56 pm

THANX CHU PIE!!!!!!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Mon Feb 20, 2012 6:51 pm

kesha1658 wrote:
^ THANK YUH!!!

@yuffie if ur hate it thats ur prob!!!
dont take it out on the artist!! i do chibis, NOT ANIME its hard for me
She didn't say she hates it and she's not taking it out on you

For recolors 9/10
For Drawings 4.5/10 Sorry I personally don't like chibi
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PostSubject: Re: ≥.≤ Piper's art Thread ≥.≤    Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:15 pm

i added 4 four in tthe digital pixels
its not one picture its four
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