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PostSubject: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:20 pm

CREATOR'S NOTICE

The creator of the story wrote things in this story that were true in real life, and things that were not true.

1- Starting Out

Sharpsul Lacario. That's me! I'm nice and cool at times, but I suffer never-ending nightmares. There's no way to solve it sometimes, but if I do try to solve it, things go twisted.

Me and Corey sat down with our lunch. We were eating our pizza, and discussing things. Don't ask, you'll see.

"Like Miranda huh?" he said.

I looked up, and dropped my pizza to the tray.

"You knew how?" I said.

"I decoded the letters you gave me, its not that hard." he said with a smirk.

I hate it when Corey smirks. He smirks when my Anger Bar is at orange and a half, or orange and 3/4 quarters.

"Its gonna be hard telling her." I said, with a sigh.

"Its not that hard, you know that girl Ciara? She liked me in 2nd grade, but we hate each other now," he said. Like I needed his advice. Welcome to my nightmare, Corey.

"I just had the weirdest thought, if she distreats me, its gonna hurt horribly." I said, having those tingly feelings.

"We'll see at recess." he said.

I shouted Miranda's name from across the lunch table. It took 5 shouts for her to hear me. Shocker.

"Umm, what kind of soup do you like?" I asked, embarrassed.

Awkward. PURE AWKWARDNESS.

"What?" she asked.

"Nothing." I said, looking at my pizza.

Corey cracked up. Nice friend he is.

"Don't worry Sharpsul, we'll see at recess." he said.

I felt a dark world coming...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:24 pm

Good, but can it be more descriptive?

I have something else but I think I'd rather not say it...
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:25 pm

Strawberry2424 wrote:
Good, but can it be more descriptive?

I have something else but I think I'd rather not say it...

I'd rather know what you wanna say, then hiding it.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:27 pm

Sharpsul99 wrote:
Strawberry2424 wrote:
Good, but can it be more descriptive?

I have something else but I think I'd rather not say it...

I'd rather know what you wanna say, then hiding it.

I told you on CB

But I really like it.

Next chapter, can it be more descriptive maybe? (No offense, but I'm a total writing/reading freak)
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:28 pm

Kewl! I lve it so far. Its kinda like with my bf, he is like "Lorena wanna go,... to science class with me??"
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:44 pm

I like it! Can't wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:07 pm

Great story. Although I couldn't resist laughing at 'miranda'.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:09 pm

18forkss wrote:
Great story. Although I couldn't resist laughing at 'miranda'.

lol. i was thinking, "i remember viper said that sharp has a crush on this miranda person."

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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:36 pm

Thanks guys.

I will write Chapter 2 tomorrow or Tuesday.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:23 pm

18forkss wrote:
Great story. Although I couldn't resist laughing at 'miranda'.

Great minds think alike xP
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:23 pm

Bluerivers wrote:
18forkss wrote:
Great story. Although I couldn't resist laughing at 'miranda'.

Great minds think alike xP

Nice way to break it to me Rolling EyesRolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:24 pm

Sharp, you can't go blaming me, Forkie said it too.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:25 pm

OMG Sharp Really Cuz he was Laughing at Miranda Big DEAL!
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PostSubject: Re: ~Sharpsul's Nightmare Reality~ #1   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:26 pm

nicki445 wrote:
OMG Sharp Really Cuz he was Laughing at Miranda Big DEAL!

Ugh.

Leave me alone :S.
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