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PostSubject: ~Life or Death Story~   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:15 pm



Life or Death
By: Millie
Chapter One – Castle Guardians
I went to the underworld to search for my brother, because I remember that Princess Cecily told me that he was in her castle. Genevieve came along with me.
“Hold! You can not pass through.” One of the guards said to us.
“Genevieve Lafeyet.” Genevieve told them and showed them her pendant.
They let her pass, but didn’t let me pass.
“I can not force them to let you in too, it’s not in my authority.” She said to me.
I sighed.
“We’ll do this the hard way then!” I yelled while taking out my sword. I smiled evilly and charged towards them.
Chapter Two – The Fun Battle
I jumped into the air and stabbed one in the chest.
I slapped another in the face, then got my blade out and slashed him.
“Heh… this is getting fun!” I shouted while punching a guard in the stomach and bit him. Now it’s the last guard… He looks tough though… I said to myself.
I dashed into the air and my wings grew, but it was too late, he already grabbed me by the feet. He pulled me down, but then somebody stabbed him already. The guard fell to the ground taking me with him.


Sorriez, it's so short. xD
I'm on Chapter Four right now, but I'll post the other three later.

(P.S: I used scenes from Vampires VS. Humans, if you know what it is. ;D)

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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:16 pm

darn it. Im not in it.
XD.

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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:23 pm

Kawaii Maker wrote:
darn it. Im not in it.
XD.

You'll be in it soon. xD

What do you think of it?

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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:26 pm

I enoy your writing style, the idea ia epic.
Be more descriptive, and a great astroy youll ahve,

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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sat Apr 24, 2010 10:31 pm

New chapter added. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:04 am

xD My Genevieve is in it. Be more descriptive, and make the chapters a little longer. But since you adding chapters crazy fast, its okay to be short as long as you have a 200 chapter book. xD
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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:29 am

hahaa there good!
need more description thoo Wink
ooh!! winggss Very Happy me likey wings =D
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PostSubject: Re: ~Life or Death Story~   Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:35 pm

Thanks guys!

When I'm doing Chapter Four and the rest, I'll try to make it more descriptive. :3

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