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PostSubject: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:21 pm

Chapter One

"Hey, Bridgittt." My boyfriend, Trevor, sat down next to me, and messed with my hair. I put my arm around him and lay my head on his shoulder.
My friend smirked from across the lunch table.
Trevor removed his hand from me as quick as I removed my arm from him. He turned suddenly shy.
"So," Ally began, "You guys going to that party Friday night together?"
"I...don't know..." Trevor shot me a glance and then looked down. I looked straight into his chocolate brown eyes and he looked deep into my sapphire blue ones.
"Um, I guess," I said, blushing like crazy. Trevor grabbed my wrist under the table so Ally couldn't tell. I smiled.
"Oh well..." Ally said, as T.J. came to the table. T.J. was her best friend, even though he was a guy.
"Wazzup, dogs?" He put on a fake gangster accent and did the worst gangster impression ever. We all burst out in hysterics.
"Ally, can I talk to you later?" T.J. got serious. He was NEVER serious. Trevor and I exchanged glances.
"'Kay," Ally said, oblivious to the tension in this moment. She sipped her milk and T.J. went back to his table.
I wondered what would happen next.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:32 pm

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
what grade u in anyway?
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:01 pm

I agree with Nicki, I love it too!

I like the details :3

Cant wait for more!

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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:11 pm

I love it!

Could there be a bit more details about each character and what they look and act like? I see T.J. has been described very well, but I don't have a clue at everyone else except Trevor's chocolate eyes..
(No offense)

But otherwise it amazing! Can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:19 pm

(Continued Chapter 1)

Ally blushed. I knew she liked T.J. He had the cutest yellow curly hair, and a grin and lots of freckles. His braces just added to his shiny smile. His light blue eyes looked great against all his other Abercrombie clothes.
Trevor had hair as dark as his eyes, but it was only down to like, an inch below his ears. He wore contacts cuz his glasses broke constantly.
Ally had auburn hair and looked mostly like T.J. but without glasses.
And me? I have dirty-blonde hair and a light dusting of freckles across my nose. I have silver braces and deep blue eyes. I guess I'm attractive.
Trevor released my wrist as a lunch aid walked by the table. When she left he grabbed it again.
"Oh my God, lunch is almost over." Trevor hurried back to his table, which was the table right next to Ally's and mine. Taylor was at the dentist today, and Lizzy had gone to visit another table.
I smiled.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:50 pm

Nice! Good Job! Blue you got talent
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:13 pm

Thats great Blue!

I love how you described every character XD
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:33 pm

Awesome story! A lil bit more detail would make the story more interesting to the reader than it already is. I love it!
How old are you... to have a boyfriend? lol just curious.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 5:36 pm

Great Job! Girly! Congratz u got Skills lol
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:54 pm

yeah its really great blue
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:57 pm

Great story! More detail could use, other than that, nice!
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:16 pm

Chapter Two

I ran to my closet on Friday. Yesterday HAD only been Thursday, and after all, I had the hottest outfit in mind.
Pink and white Etnies with knee high argyle pink and white socks looked very nice with short white Justice shorts and a pink camisole. My hair would be wavy and down, and i'd wear pink lip gloss(strawberry flavored) for that kiss I knew I would be getting from Trevor.
"Bye Mom, I'm leaving," I said, blowing her a kiss and walking down the street to my friend Ashley's house, where the party was.
The instant I walked outside, Trevor snuck up from behind me and piggybacked me all the way down the street. When we got to Ashley's, he hugged me then went off with his friends as I found Ally and Taylor.
Taylor was really little, and tiny. She had her brown hair in a high ponytail and her freckles brought out her deep brown eyes. She wore a Roxy shirtdress that was lime green with matching flip flops.
Ally was wearing her outfit from school that day: Dark denim skinny jeans and an orange tank top with orange flip flops.
"We all look great," I gushed. We hugged and ran off to the firepit.
There we were roasting marshmallows.
After about 25 minutes of small talk, someone came from behind me. It was Trevor's best friend, Dylan.
Dylan was Chinese looking, but he wasn't Chinese. He looked like Trevor, just not as hot.
"Hey, Trevor wants to meet you in Ashley's shed," He said. He pulled me up and led me over. Ally and Taylor looked distraught. I couldn't do anything....could I?
When Dylan put me in the shed, he locked the door too. Trevor was waiting. He immediately started kissing me, extreme.
He fit his tongue in my mouth and then wrapped his arms around me. He mashed me against the side of the shed, and went in for it.
I couldn't stop. It was too hot. When he came up for air, we both lay on the bottom of the shed.
Trevor looked away, then faced me. Oh, God. He was gonna try to jump me!
I rolled away. "You're using me for...sexual crap." My eyes watered, but immediately stopped when he rolled me back over and started kissing me again...
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:23 pm

Ooh, I wonder what happens!!

Can't wait for more!

EDIT: Wait, this is true!?

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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:50 pm

Ooh... This is true? How old r u!! Surprised xD If 12 or something, then thats sorta young to be making out and a dude about to jump on you. o.o
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:04 am

lol its good but as evryones asked. how old are you?? XD
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 1:23 pm

Oh God.

Amazing.

But...

Inappropriate, if this happened irl.

How old are you?

I think yah know why I'm asking..

But can't wait for more!
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 2:11 pm

LOL

For anyone asking, this didn't happen in real life. Only part of it is true, my friend said that it'd catch interest.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 4:23 pm

Oh my God, great story, I can't wait to see more.
Guys, shes 11. Also, if this were true your boyfriend would be a perv.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:09 pm

Chapter Three

I shoved Trevor off.
"What the..." I whispered, and wiped my lips off.
"Why'd you do that, Trevor?"
He paused and sat next to me. "Bridgit, I think that you're the most beautiful girl I've ever met. I don't know why I did it..."
Then I saw it.
A tiny camera, dangling from his Aeropostale jeans...
"You freaking little liar."
Trevor looked up at me. "What?"
"How long have you been working on your acting?" I said, my eyes filling with hot tears. He'd been using me... I ripped the camera off his jeans.
Trevor couldn't even look at me. I couldn't tell if he was laughing or not.
But when he looked up, he was crying. "Bridgit, let me explain," He gasped.
"No, you friggin' little retard!" I stomped on his foot, and got up.
"GO ROT IN HELL!" With that, I stomped out of the shed.
Dylan looked at me, and then looked at the camera in my hand. I ran over to the campfire, crying heavily. I was a kissing doll... he'd probably been waiting to put this on YouTube for weeks...
The other boys ran over as I tossed the camera in the campfire...and then I ran home.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:15 pm

OMG I LOVE IT U NEED TO MAKE CHAP 4 OMG I LOVE IT OMG!
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:28 pm

Thats so good!!!

And guys who would say that she said a bad word, heck no it ain't.

Its a place, so stop even before you post...

But its amazing!!!

Make more!
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:48 pm

OMG OMG OMG I NEED MORE IM IN LOVE WITH IT! lol
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 5:58 pm

omg i cant wait for chap 4 Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:22 pm

Chapter Four

I ran through the door, whimpering. I concealed my tears and wiped my face off, then went back to Ashley's party.
I looked back at Trevor. He was sitting and had his head in his hands.
His friends were around him saying, "Sorry, man, we didn't know she'd bug out like that..." I marched over, still whimpery.
"This is why you don't have girlfriends." I smirked. I went off to find Ally and Taylor, but soon realized they'd left to go find me.
Ashley ran over, her face TOO made up, and her cheerleader uniform at its sluttiest.
Dylan caught sight of her. He looked away in anger. He hated Ashley and had only been there for the show, I realized.
I wanted to cry more, and so I ran inside Ashley's house, where Boom Boom Pow was cranking at full volume. I ran in and sat on a chair, watching everyone dance.
"Bridgit? What the hell happened?" My best guy friend, Bryant, ran over. He was wearing his favorite black and blue Etnies and his favorite black shorts and matching navy top. His curly brown hair was curled to perfection.
I told him. "Screw them." He picked me up. "Wanna dance?" I nodded, smiling. He carried me off onto the dance floor, where we danced our butts off to the Black Eyed Peas.
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PostSubject: Re: So Easy to Love: A True Story   Mon Apr 26, 2010 6:29 pm

OMG OMG OMG I love it Cant wait till Chap 5 Hope its soon!
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