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| Subject: My limerick Fri Mar 09, 2012 10:50 pm | |
| Yeah, some time back we learnt what limericks were in school. So I decided to make one of my own.
There was a rather short man, who loved getting himself tanned, but once while basking in the sun he tripped on a chocolate bun and fell face down into the sand.
Please rate and comment, it's my very first limerick.
Second limerick-
One day the sun said to the moon, "Today, I shall grant you a boon!" The moon was snide And gleefully replied, "I want to turn you into a baboon"
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| | | IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!! Featured User
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| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:01 am | |
| LOL. He tripped on a chocolate bun ^^ This is amazing c: 9/10 | |
| | | Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:26 am | |
| Thankies. c: I hope he likes sand buns.. | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:03 am | |
| This would have been good when I needed a limerick done. xD Those are hard. Anyway cool job! Oh and chocolate bun ftw!
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| | | Terezi, Junior Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:04 am | |
| wuts a limerick??????
and ways EPIC CHOCO LATO BUNN O'S that sounded better in my head | |
| | | Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:05 am | |
| LOL! It's funny! Chocolate Buns! | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563 Join date : 2010-07-14 Age : 23 Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:07 am | |
| I think it's a poem that:
First line has 6 or 5 words Second like has 6 or 5 words that rhyme with the line ontop third line has 7 or 8 words (less or more) fourth line has 7 or 8 words that rhyme with the top line (less or more) fifth line has 6 or 5 words that rhyme with the first two lines in the limerick.
It's a poem that goes in ^^ order I think. | |
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| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:56 am | |
| Nope. Limericks are short, funny, five-lined poems. The last line of a limerick is supposed to be the funniest. The first, second and fifth line are supposed to rhyme, and the third and fourth are supposed to rhyme. | |
| | | Abstract Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:58 am | |
| Lol well I was correct about the rhyming part (Am I right?)
Oh I forgot to rate it, 9/10! C: | |
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| Subject: Re: My limerick Sat Mar 10, 2012 9:45 am | |
| Yeah, you were. ^^ Thanks, everyone! I just made my second limerick-
One day the sun said to the moon, "Today, I shall grant you a boon!" The moon was snide And gleefully replied, "I want to turn you into a baboon" | |
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