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PostSubject: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeFri Mar 09, 2012 10:50 pm

Yeah, some time back we learnt what limericks were in school. So I decided to make one of my own.

There was a rather short man,
who loved getting himself tanned,
but once while basking in the sun
he tripped on a chocolate bun
and fell face down into the sand.


Please rate and comment, it's my very first limerick.

Second limerick-

One day the sun said to the moon,
"Today, I shall grant you a boon!"
The moon was snide
And gleefully replied,
"I want to turn you into a baboon"


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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 1:01 am

LOL.
He tripped on a chocolate bun ^^
This is amazing c:
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 1:26 am

Thankies. c: I hope he likes sand buns..
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:03 am

This would have been good when I needed a limerick done. xD Those are hard. Anyway cool job! Oh and chocolate bun ftw!


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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:04 am

wuts a limerick??????


and ways EPIC CHOCO LATO BUNN O'S
that sounded better in my head
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:05 am

LOL! It's funny! Chocolate Buns!
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:07 am

I think it's a poem that:

First line has 6 or 5 words
Second like has 6 or 5 words that rhyme with the line ontop
third line has 7 or 8 words (less or more)
fourth line has 7 or 8 words that rhyme with the top line (less or more)
fifth line has 6 or 5 words that rhyme with the first two lines in the limerick.

It's a poem that goes in ^^ order I think.
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:56 am

Nope. Limericks are short, funny, five-lined poems. The last line of a limerick is supposed to be the funniest. The first, second and fifth line are supposed to rhyme, and the third and fourth are supposed to rhyme.
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 8:58 am

Lol well I was correct about the rhyming part (Am I right?)

Oh I forgot to rate it, 9/10! C:
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PostSubject: Re: My limerick   My limerick Icon_minitimeSat Mar 10, 2012 9:45 am

Yeah, you were. ^^
Thanks, everyone! I just made my second limerick-

One day the sun said to the moon,
"Today, I shall grant you a boon!"
The moon was snide
And gleefully replied,
"I want to turn you into a baboon"
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