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PostSubject: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:02 pm

Yep, third drawing (:

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I tried to make the eye look good but it turned out a little strange.

Please rate and critique.
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:04 pm

Omg third? That would be my third-ieth! Make the neck smaller and shade under the neck and around the legs, just keep on shading. 8/10. C:
Also shorten the leg on the right.


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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:06 pm

I like the eyes....
I draw but my eyes r worse when I draw... always come out wrong
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:23 pm

That's beautiful. Make the neck a little shorter, and space out the hands a bit. 9/10 ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:29 pm

Pretty nice. I'm too lazy to critique, though. 6.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:52 pm

Oh it's really nice for paint, my only problem is the left leg. It's bending too high so she appears to have broken it.

Everything else is wonderfully, especially if it's done on paint :3
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sat Mar 10, 2012 11:04 pm

Thank you for the critique guys (:
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:25 am

This is pretty good. The only thing I have a problem with is the hands r kinda weird.
9/10
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 12:51 am

nice, but the right leg looks like a bone.

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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:27 am

8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:17 am

omg, when i saw the drawing, i was like

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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:35 am

I love it!
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:38 pm

it looks nice.
the neck is a little too skinny though.
i don't feel like critiquing much or whatever.
i'd give it a 6 or so.

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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:53 pm

Here is what I think leg is bent to high, arms are ok just the hands and the neck make it smaller

99.9/10


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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:54 pm

the leg looks weird, also he knee. 8/10 it looks like you use this on paint do you?
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Sun Mar 11, 2012 3:55 pm

its cute c. 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Mon Mar 12, 2012 12:04 am

Yes I used those on Paint. Thank you c:
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Mon Mar 12, 2012 5:11 pm

it really good but yew can tellol that the leg in the air is a lot longer
its better off making it a tiny bit shorter
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PostSubject: Re: Third drawing made on Paint   Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:55 am

I felt like critiquing, so I will. I've also done a bit of basic (not perfect) redlining to show you what I'm talking about. Keep in mind that this critique may or may not be perfect, but it's coming from my best art experience and all that I have learned over the months:

Here is an Image of the Redlining:
 

I will go from the top to the bottom to make it clearer:

My Critique, According to the Redlining:
 

There are some things I didn't red-line/critique on, such as leg shape, hair shape, etc. That kind of stuff comes with time and experience. As your art progresses, you should notice improvement in those areas, so just keep on practicing. I wasn't trying in any way to degrade your art, and I'm sorry if I came on that way. I was only making valuable points and suggestions. If you didn't read my entire critique (even if you aren't Melody that's reading this) please do so, because I'm sure it will help you greatly. c:


Overall, I'd give this a 56/100. Pretty good, especially for mouse art. Just keep on practicing and improving! ;3
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