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♥Rubber Ducky
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PostSubject: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:03 am

From the creater of I want what I want comes *I'm going crazy bout you*

DA na da na na da na na na da da na na

soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I'm sitting on the couch trying not to think bout you
but then I see a picture of you
I still am trying hard not to think about you
your still in ma head its trying to get out
but all I do is shout
I'm going crazy bout you
I know we had bad times
I know we had them good
but we were so close too the edge
I was trying not to lose
but then I lost you
oh yea oh yea
but the thing I will never forget
is youuu


ok stand by for more songs by me please rate


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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 4:18 am

It's lovely. c: 10000/10. I think you should write more, but you can make one thread to post it all.
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 5:10 am

The first is better, but it's still pretty good. 8.5/10.
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 7:47 am

9/10. It needs more rhyms but it's AWESOME! I would totaly buy that song on my ipod touch 4 If I could!
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:32 am

6/10.
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 1:44 pm

like yuffie said the first one is better.

To much you's and 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:09 pm

do have a boyfriend? is that you wrote this song?

7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:41 pm

I like your first one better, but 7/10. It's still pretty good! I kind of hate anything about 'you' though. Like International Love or whatever you call it, tooo much 'you's. But other than that it's good.
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PostSubject: Re: A song I wrote 2   Tue Mar 13, 2012 1:34 am

No I don't have a boyfriend
but I just did'nt know what to write so I just made something up
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